This is Not My Beautiful Wife [S/X, Mature]

Apr 30, 2007 19:30

Title: This is Not My Beautiful Wife (3rd story in the "This is Not a Trilogy" series)
Authors: apreludetoanend and savoytruffle
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: Mature
Warnings: Excessive use of cultural references, both high and low brow.
Notes: This is a series of three different stories that do not follow upon each other, but rather share the same beginning, each veering ( Read more... )

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yourlibrarian May 1 2007, 01:43:14 UTC
Except possibly about the part where Xander forgot to tell the something that he loved him before setting him free.

Oops! And hee.

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apreludetoanend June 20 2007, 19:45:37 UTC
Thanks so much for reading and commenting--sorry to be so late with the reply!

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julia_here May 1 2007, 02:11:20 UTC
This makes me really really homesick for the days when I could read nothing but quality Spander every free moment I had. This makes me remember why that was what I wanted to do.

Also, I want to know more about Mexico.

Julia, and this has been a freakishly awful day, so I'm glad y'all were posting, because otherwise I might not have made it in one piece.

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mpoetess May 4 2007, 22:51:42 UTC
This makes me really really homesick for the days when I could read nothing but quality Spander every free moment I had. This makes me remember why that was what I wanted to do.

*peers suspiciously at Julia, then at the space in my head where this comment ought to be*

What she said.

*loves*

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savoytruffle May 20 2007, 22:07:05 UTC
aw, thanks!

like i said to julia, i miss the days when i actually answered comments promptly and it was like a conversation with my readers. *sigh*

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savoytruffle May 20 2007, 22:02:04 UTC
and i, in turn, shall reminisce about those days when i used to actually answer a comment before the time when the person who commented would have completey forgotten about leaving the comment in the first place. it made for nice communication.

thanks for reading.

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allyndra May 1 2007, 03:49:59 UTC
All three of these are tremendous, but this one was my favorite. Especially
this bit:

He runs north because north is where Starbucks is and Mexico isn’t. Not that he’d ever make it that far. He’s still winded after two miles.

He leaves Starbucks with a mocha latte and a vague sense of having sold out, and he blames it on the delicious, chocolaty, global imperialism.

Thanks for sharing!

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apreludetoanend June 20 2007, 19:47:16 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Thanks so much for reading and commenting; it's much appreciated, despite the lateness of this reply.

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tabaqui May 1 2007, 14:59:10 UTC
Ah ha ha.

Hrmmmmmmm... I don't think i liked this one *as much* as the first two, but that's just 'cause my own 'work for the council forever' intrest has faded muchly...

I like cell phones in a box in the closet, i like Spike kicking him out of bed every time, heh.

I like the running, which is, of course, running *to*.

Lovely stuff.

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savoytruffle May 21 2007, 04:08:49 UTC
thanks. and perfecty understandable, we all have our particular scenarios that bring us the most glee and fit the most with our preferred versions of the characters. *g*

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laisserais May 1 2007, 15:53:14 UTC
i loved how this last one veers differently at each step. and i love how the architecture of the story comes to mean different things here. and yet, how in each version there's always a coming together. it's almost as if it's inevitable!

it's so interesting to see all of the different choices, in each setting, and how each one plays out. and i love comparing what's stayed the same throughout.

this series is completely brilliant. i feel like there's so much more to say, but i can't articulate it beyond: awesome! i loved them all!

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apreludetoanend June 20 2007, 19:48:34 UTC
Hi!

Also, substantively: Thanks. I'm really glad you enjoyed how these worked together; they were much fun to write!

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