20/20 [Jared/Jensen, PG]

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For j2_remix I turned wanttobeatree's lovely The Incredibly Ordinary Adventure of Jared and Jensen into something for which I must apologize: opticians and optometrists of the world, I'm sorry. I do not hate you

Comments

[electricalgwen]

IT'S YOU IN THE CHAIR WITH THE KINDLE ISN'T IT. (Or your iPod. *g*)

Much, much love for them in this. And for you! ♥

Neat remix. The last line is great. I love Jared's deterrence tactics, and oh, his comments on Jensen's suit and tie! Hee! Bonus Chad is nearly always a plus. *g*

Just for my edification: do people with 20/20 vision really go to the optometrist on any kind of regular basis? Maybe this is a US thing? Honestly, I don't think I've had an eye test since the screening thing they do when you start school. Oh, and for my driver's license.

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Re: going to the eye doctor, I wouldn't know. I didn't want to change the setting of the original, though, so we'll just pretend that Jared has some reason for doing it. Thanks! =)

[macbyrne]

I absolutely adored the random little comments Jared was making; between Hannah Montana and her foreskin, I was dying. Oh wait, I think I got those confused! ROFL.

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There is no line Jared won't cross in defense of his chair! Thank you. =)

[quietdiscerning]

I would like to protest in honor of the optometry/ophthalmology office that I work at, which is not creepy! At all!

But other than that, this story is all kinds of awesome!!! :D Jared is adorable trying not to panic and babbling at Jensen! I would love to call Jared (and/or Jensen) in for an appointment. I'd get the names right at least. (In extreme cases we spell out the correct enunciation on the chart)

You did get the two sizes too small chairs right, unfortunately. :)

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I've got nothing against optometrists, I promise! Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed this. =)

[counteragent]

hahahaha! Who knew you were funny, too?! I've only ever read your more lyrical stuff, so I had no idea you could do humor with such a deft touch. This was adorable!

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Xander Harris. That's how I learned to write. Some grasp of observational humor is a must. *g* It's lovely to hear that you liked this. Thank you! <333

[rhythmsextion]

Ahahaha, oh, JARED. His little inappropriate comments were FANTASTIC and I love how Jensen wasn't fazed at all, just dove right in. I love fics that show them bonding right away, just settling in and getting comfortable with each other right from the start.

Your writing never fails to make me happy, man. Loved this.

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It's so nice of you to say that. Thank you. <333

I'm glad you liked Jared's little comments. It's not often I get to write about Hannah Montana and foreskin anatomy. Which, now that I think about it, is definitely a good thing.