My Aim Is True [Gen, PG13]

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Comments

[mgbutterfly]

Oh, this is heartbreaking.

I love the way you write. Have I told you that lately? Because I do. Every time I read one of your stories it's like I'm there, watching. Everything's so vivid and real and it's like the words become images and the images come alive.

This is just like that. Just like that.

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You are absolutely lovely. <333

[smilla02]

Oh, this is so heartbreaking and sad. :(
I like how you structured their relationship, the lie in this sentence: They’re not friends. They’re barely even acquaintances..

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I'm so glad you saw that. Thanks, beautiful. <333

[innie_darling]

That is fantastic, the ways in which she defies all of Dean's (low) expectations, how Dean resents this job but she tilts everything just enough.

[apreludetoanend]

My first OFC! I'm so glad she worked for you. (And just so you know, now that I've tried writing one for myself, your OFCs amaze me even more.)

[brunettepet]

The picture you painted made Alison live and breathe, which makes this hurt so much more. She's poised to start life, and then it's ended. Reaching out and opening up to Dean made him do the same. Anticipated meetings and that little business with her hair revealed growing connection. It's no wonder Dean stops letting anyone outside their circle in. It's not worth the pain. Lovely work.

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Thank you! It's so lovely to hear that you liked this, and I'm so glad you liked the OC and noticed those little details about her relationship with Dean. <333

[electricalgwen]

If Dad doesn’t trust him to help, then he can do his own damn research.

You know I love this! ♥

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