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tishawyman July 7 2009, 01:29:29 UTC
The feelings are getting intense. I like the slow build up. This is really good.

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apreludetoanend July 7 2009, 19:36:29 UTC
Thanks so much! =)

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electricalgwen September 6 2009, 01:11:13 UTC
“Your room? Chad's doing something in ours, I don't even want to know, but there's a diagram.” :)

Jensen's sleep-addled phone call with Chris is great; it manages to convey so much without saying it clearly, just as best friends could.

I love the repeat here of Jensen naming Jared's muscles, gentle slope of the trapezius to the mastoid process. Other delightful uses of language: used Dorito and post-Chad. Hee!

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hdwhoremonger November 6 2010, 01:39:04 UTC
jesus woman! i really think you're trying to murder me. or cause me to murder myself via fierce gripping of my own limbs, effectively cutting off circulation. this entire story is a huge ball of intense, and there's not even half of it left! i want to see the end, yet i don't want it to end. i'm going to have to eat so much chocolate after this...

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