I'd suggest choosing one of these threads - moving around a lot, initiation into black culture, or multiculturalism through dance - and developing it more fully. They each have the potential for an interesting and insightful look into your personal motivations, but none of them are really developed enough to understand it. Remember, it's only one page. You're not going to be able to explain yourself fully in one page! You want to pick one element or aspect that you think best reflects who you are and what you want and really communicate that, instead of just giving a list of diversity experiences.
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I'd suggest choosing one of these threads - moving around a lot, initiation into black culture, or multiculturalism through dance - and developing it more fully. They each have the potential for an interesting and insightful look into your personal motivations, but none of them are really developed enough to understand it. Remember, it's only one page. You're not going to be able to explain yourself fully in one page! You want to pick one element or aspect that you think best reflects who you are and what you want and really communicate that, instead of just giving a list of diversity experiences.
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