ggreenapple : Spn : Safe Passage : fic : gen : PG13

[appletarts]

title: Safe Passage
rating/warnings: PG13
wordcount: 400
content notes: Preseries. Gen with intimacy. Mild AU.
summary: marked.

read @ greenapple.oscillating.net

Comments

[nova_berry]

wow, i just love this so much.

it stretched them both like the coils of a spring, too far, too tight; and Dean bent to him again, folded Sam into him and covered his mouth in a sideways, sloppy kiss. Breathing in his cries, swallowing them, and giving back silence.

beautiful, so beautiful it hurts.

[ggreenapple]

thank you, ma'am. :)

[estei]

This fic is so pitch-perfect, there's so much suggestion here, yet so little defined. I love how the reader is lulled into a sense of complacency at first, like this marking is something necessary, like cauterizing a physical wound, and then with the mirroring of Dean's wounds it suddenly seems so much darker, more intense, and more layered. And then, the last lines just broke my heart.

[ggreenapple]

i'm glad you got something good from it. thanks for taking the time to read and to leave so many kind comments. :)