[One-shot] Tohoku (Prince of Tennis)

[aiwritingfic]

Title: Tohoku
Characters: Tezuka/Fuji
Wordcount/Rating: 1200+ words / G
Summary: Tezuka leads Fuji to Tohoku in search of something; Fuji leads Tezuka home to find it.
Author's Notes: Written for vierblith_tefu for christmas_cacti and first posted here on Dec 2, 2007. I hope everyone enjoys this. Four people used the same word ("vivid") and three different people used the

Comments

[ontogenesis]

What a lovely story. I'm not too familiar with these characters, but I liked the portrayal of Tezuka's indecisiveness and uncertainty - I know what it's like to feel empty when you expected to feel something. And Fuji's quiet supportiveness was lovely. ^^

I also liked it, of course, since I just had that trip to Kyoto not so long ago. Perhaps I'll have to drag you hiking one of these days (did I tell you I used to be an officer in a camping club?) =^.^=

[aiwritingfic]

♥ Oh, thank you. *loves*

I think you did, yes! Remember that bunny we talked about, with the camping and everything? I didn't write it, and wrote this instead. I go hiking as long as the weather isn't too bad and we aren't expected to camp overnight. (If you expect me to sleep in a tent, I need a LOT of convincing ...)

[vierblith_tefu]

But it is very vivid. I can just see the scenes in my eyes and the portrayal was just so beautiful. I do like it! ^_^
Thank you very much!

[aiwritingfic]

*hearts and snuggles* That's a relief--I'm so happy to hear you like it! ♥

[a1y_puff]

this was lovely! I'm not familiar with the four seasons (since I live in an only-two-seasons-country)
but you portrayed the environment pretty well, I can almost see it ^___^

and I love Fuji here! he was so understanding of Tezuka's emptiness
and his christmas gift for Tezuka was just as lovely!

by the way, this:
Fuji was right. Tezuka felt it now, the chill beginning to permeate through his jacket. He checked Fuji's clothes, relieved to find Fuji had also dressed warmly. Fuji's scarf looked a little disheveled, and without speaking, Tezuka reached out. He handed Fuji his cup, unwound Fuji's scarf, and then wound it back efficiently.

Fuji chuckled when Tezuka was done. "Thank you, Mother," he said, eyes twinkling at Tezuka as he returned the cup.
was so much win and love! <3
Fuji called Tezuka 'mother' cracked me up XD

Nice story! thanks for sharing! XD

[aiwritingfic]

♥ Thank you for the lovely comment and for telling me what worked for you. I definitely worked hard on the atmosphere and imagery, and Fuji knows his Tezuka oh-so-well. ^_^ Please keep reading!

[aiwritingfic]

*snuggles and hearts* Thank you, dear. (Yeah, you can tell I'm an anime girl ...) I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3

[kumoru]

I love it. It's so pretty~ ♥ I'm aching to travel again now.

[aiwritingfic]

♥ Japan awaits. Thank you!

[kumoru]

Been working on my applications so I can come to school there in the fall of this year! XDD

[aiwritingfic]

<3 Ganbatte! *snuggles* If you do we'll hang out!