[Fic] Crossing Boundaries 5/? (Hikaru no Go)

[aiwritingfic]

Title: Crossing Boundaries 5/? (Chapter 5: Correspondence)
Authors: aiwritingfic and chaineddove
Characters: Hikago ensemble
Wordcount/Rating: 6650+ words / PG-13 (thanks to Yang Hai)
Summary: Isumi is stuck with the notion that Le Ping is a kid. Le Ping, unfortunately, has other ideas.
Author's Notes: Dedicated to aiwritingfic's Nintendo DS and the last tomato in chaineddove's refrigerator.

Comments

[lanerose]

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You two make me so happy!!! I'm not sure where to start. Okay, what sticks out the most... the whole Honinbo games with Kuwabara-sensei, especially the part about sealing the move and Kuwabara looking disappointed when Isumi was totally unrattled the next morning - awesome! The part where Yang Hai forces Waya to play with him before he'll tell Isumi to leave Waya alone about the whole dating thing and then calls Waya on the whole Link vs. Zelda thing - so much love. The bit where Suyong blackmailed Shindou into giving him Yashiro's address to give to Yongha - and Yashiro's response to Yongha calling him, and Touya's response to that - ♥♥♥ The plane ticket thing was awesome, too. Just in general, this whole thing was awesome!!!

Yay~! ♥

[aiwritingfic]

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Thank you! <3 Comments like this make staying up to 4am writing SO WORTH IT. We loved playing with these people, and we're so glad you enjoyed it! <3 <3 <3 <3

[chaineddove]

I was like, I MUST PUT THE KOREANS IN HERE SOMEHOW OR I WILL NEVER FORGIVE MYSELF. I'm glad that went over well with you *lol*

I'm so glad you're still with us! We swear we'll finish this!

[qem_chibati]

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(In case you don't know that means I liked it)

[chaineddove]

Wow, excessive squee.

We're very glad to have pleased you!

[issen4]

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Fantastic! I adored the way Le Ping and Yang Hai and everyone encouraged Isumi in the Honinbou games. Go Isumi! And Kuwabara is hilarious in the way he harasses his opponents (and the way Ogata is avoiding him!)

Very nicely done; each voice is quite distinctive and the whole exchange was enjoyable to read. ^^

[chaineddove]

Ai-chan's Kuwabara is the best. She has me in stitches on a regular basis.

Thanks for the nice compliments and for sticking with us through the hiatus!

♥

[uminohikari]

I love the way this fic is told!

The progression of Le Ping's Japanese is really well done (I suspect aiwritingfic's experience in teaching English?)

Suyong blackmailing Shindou was also very amusing ♥

And I love how Le Ping knows that Isumi will complain if the ticket wasn't refundable *laughs*

[chaineddove]

*lol* Actually, I wrote all of Le Ping's "lines" myself, so rather than Ai-chan's experience teaching English, it's more... my geeky linguist skills *lol*

As for the ticket, if it was refundable, Le Ping knows Isumi would make him return it and take the money.

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed!

[tekalynn]

Oh, if you only knew how I CACKLED through this! And I was touched, too.

Too many brilliant bits to mention, but the Ogata-Kouyo exchange is a standout. "Just wanted to see his expression" indeed!

[chaineddove]

I'm so glad! ♥

That bit only goes to show that Touya Kouyo does indeed have a personality! Ai-chan is brilliant to put that in!