[Fic] Crossing Boundaries 4/? (Hikaru no Go)

[aiwritingfic]

Title: Crossing Boundaries 4/? (Chapter 4: Delusion)
Authors: aiwritingfic and chaineddove
Characters: Isumi, Le Ping, Yang Hai, Waya, others (Shindou, Touya, etc etc)
Wordcount/Rating: 4100+ words / G
Summary: Isumi is stuck with the notion that Le Ping is a kid. Le Ping, unfortunately, has other ideas.
Author's Notes: Dedicated to ESL fanficcers everywhere. We're

Comments

[uminohikari]

♥

I love how well you portrayed Isumi's feelings and emotions. That's my favorite part of this chapter ♥
I also love Waya's charactization and how he reacts to Isumi. It's awesome.
Shindou and Touya's arguements made me laugh~

I think it's a bit rushed, and the scenes are a bit choppy, but overall, I love it, and eagerly await a new chapter~
the fact that it's by two of my favorite authors has nothing to do with that

[aiwritingfic]

*hearts you* <3 <3 <3

Yeah, this was not one of the easiest ones to write. T_T It was quite difficult. We're sorry. It will get better now.

[lanerose]

Always good to see fic from two of my favourite authors. ::happy contented sigh:: Almost makes up for the unpleasantness that's been going around. ^.^;;;

[chaineddove]

*petpet* I'm sure we will somehow get banned due to this fic, but, you know. Live it up while you can? *lol*

[lanerose]

Seriously. XDDD And go for it! ^_____^

[chaineddove]

After all, Le Ping is fifteen! And having thoughts inappropriate to the cloistered, pure and innocent mind of a fifteen-year-old boy! Bad Maaya!!! Bad Ai!!! How could we possibly assume that someone so young and innocent could POSSIBLY have some idea what sex entails or have a sex drive!? WHAT WERE WE SMOKING!?!?!?!? FIFTEEN-YEAR-OLD BOYS ARE SUPPOSED TO BE PLAYING WITH STUFFED ANIMALS, NOT FANTASIZING!!!!!!!!

Ahem. What, me, bitter?

[maudite_a_deux]

"No, don't misunderstand!" Isumi said desperately. "I must be thinking about him because I'm attracted to you!"

NGH! Isumi, you bonehead! I'm not even sure what mistake you just made, but I'm absolutely certain you made one!

[tekalynn]

*cackles like Kuwabara*

[chaineddove]

XD ♥

[chaineddove]

I think it can mostly be summed up in: "Isumi, thy denial is so mighty that channelled properly it could no doubt power a small third world country with electricity."

He'll get it right, really. Uh, eventually. Promise.

[inkanaitis]

i love the way you've shown how everyone grew up.

aw, Isumi, you try so hard. lol

also, loved Waya in this section. "Oh, Isumi-san." indeed. lol

[chaineddove]

Yeah, I mean really, what else can he say at 3am when Isumi's being such an idiot? *lol*

[tekalynn]

Denial, thy name is Isumi! This is so sweet and funny.

[chaineddove]

We try *lol* Despite the jerkiness of this chapter, I'm glad you stuck with us!