[One-shot] Onwards Together (Prince of Tennis)

Jul 05, 2007 15:30

Title: Onwards Together
Characters: Fuji, Eiji
Wordcount/Rating: 1100+ words / G
Summary: Fuji and Eiji talk while studying.
Author's Notes: Set before finals and entrance exams. Written for thawrecka for tenifriends and first posted here. Much thanks and love to atama_ga_itai for the beta!

'Didn't we draw on ourselves with pencils in kindergarten?' )

pot: fuji shuusuke, pot: kikumaru eiji, fandom: prince of tennis

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sugarcakey July 5 2007, 10:06:48 UTC
Aww~ Very cute ^____^ <33 I love how you write these two~, that made my working day much more shiny~ Thanks for sharing ^__^

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aiwritingfic July 5 2007, 14:05:54 UTC
<3 *snuggles* Thank you for reading it and for the kind review!

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sugarcakey July 5 2007, 15:29:15 UTC
nothing to thank for at all ^_____^ my pleasure~

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umarekawareru July 5 2007, 10:36:20 UTC
Absolutely lovely. I really love how these two interact and you've written them so well, I love it. Eiji's playful and slightly childish nature comes through so well in here (as well as Fuji's badly disguised amusement).

"Did you know Tezuka has never changed his playing style?"

Eiji looked puzzled and thought about that change of subject a moment. "Hoi, don't tell Inui that," he said. "He's been trying so hard to keep up."

That line made me giggle ^^ Lovely ficlet <3

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aiwritingfic July 5 2007, 14:06:22 UTC
<3 Thank you for reading this and for such a kind review.

(That line made me giggle writing it. ^_^ Poor Inui.)

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ketchupblood July 5 2007, 14:34:10 UTC
"I wonder what Inui would think if I told him I've never changed my style either," Fuji said, brightening.

Oh, Fuji. Be nice to the poor data-man. Poor Inui. Can you just imagine how he would react if he ever heard that? -shakes head- Anyways. This was really adorable. I loved how you wrote them!!

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aiwritingfic July 5 2007, 14:44:24 UTC
<3 Thank you very much for reading and leaving a lovely review! <3

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darth_claire July 5 2007, 16:14:57 UTC
awwww! Very cute moment between these two. I liked the line about Rikkai saying the nationals was a one time fluke. XD

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aiwritingfic July 5 2007, 22:27:38 UTC
XD <3 Thank you for reading! <3

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violeteyedhair July 5 2007, 17:25:47 UTC
I agree with everyone, this was very cute. :3 I liked it.

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aiwritingfic July 5 2007, 22:27:43 UTC
<3 Thank you for reading!

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