[One-shot] Evening Stroll (Prince of Tennis)

[aiwritingfic]

Title: Evening Stroll
Characters: Tezuka/Miyuki
Wordcount/Rating: 1400+ words / gen
Spoilers/Warnings: None / set in canon!future, around university.
Summary: Tezuka doesn't quite understand females, but perhaps one day he'll understand this one.
Author's Notes: animesque said here, "You try and write about him being romantic and soft towards a girl. Dare

Comments

[achariya]

This was so not het, tee hee hee. It'll only be het when Miyuki beats Tezuka at tennis, and he finally sees her as a human and not a random collection of clothing and strange demands.

XD

Nicely done, Ai. I enjoyed this little speculative world.

[aiwritingfic]

<3 Thanks. Er, yes, well, I call them as I see them. ^_^

[axtar]

Tezuka's so quizzical around women. ^^ It's as if they're something he's not quite familiar with.

[aiwritingfic]

*laughs* Oh my god, Tanya told me that I just have him in my mind as "gay" and nothing seems to be able to change that. T_T It's just difficult thinking of Tezuka as someone who thinks about sex and things like that. He's just so ... focused. On tennis.

(Reading your fic right now!)

[axtar]

*laughs at the 'gay' bit* I can't quite picture him thinking about sex either, but I like picturing him being a secret romantic, in his quiet, stoic way. =p

And you're reading that long fic? I think my friend was right when she told me finishing that seemed to have sapped me of descriptive power; I just keep thinking of that fic as...well, long. Really long. Long long long. >D *headwalls*

[aiwritingfic]

I am thinking of Tezuka as just a practical person who doesn't have flowery thoughts in his head. He could be romantic, but it would take an established relationship to show it.

XD *pets you* Yes, well. It's interesting so far, but I'm only up to the hand-switch. ^_^

[thesundaywriter]

Aw, I thought that was more gen then het. Then again, given his relationship with Miyuki I'd have felt weird if it developed into something more. While I don't think that he is a brick... Tezuka and romantic just doesn't really equate... this coming from a person who prefers het fics too XD
I liked how you wrote him in this fic though, and the references to Oishi... I like him clueless to these things... more in character ^^

[aiwritingfic]

<3 Thank you. <3 Yes, it was more gen than het. I suppose "het" was just a reference to the pairing. Even up there in my ratings, I called it a "gen" fic.

Yes, er ... well, you know, he's not a brick, really he's not. *sweatdrops* He's just ... er, extraordinarily focused on tennis or ... you know, business-like matters. To the exclusion of girls. Or boys. Really. He probably has dreams of tennis rackets, and zero wet dreams. ^_^;;;;;;;

[arihdni]

FOR ME IT WAS HET ¬¬

very well done, i guess we are not used to the miyuzuka, but....I adore it!

and I love you for making this!!! keep more more

[aiwritingfic]

<3 Thank you. Er, yes, this is my first PoT het. (Then again, everything I write seems to be gen.) I'm normally a slasher or everything is gen.

<3 Thank you! There's a lot more where that came from. I think I have like 70+ PoT fics written now.

[hungry_archer]

I liked it. Granted, Tezuka being straight made me go, huh? But the way it was written it was more like he was confused about Miyuki's actions than going, 'Oh, my darling, I love you!'. XDXD

♥

Great job, Ai-gata. =P

it's sherri, who is way too lazy to log out of doumeki's rp journal.

[aiwritingfic]

<3 Thank you. <3 I had to keep it IC, you know me, right? ^_^ Tezuka's not the "oh my darling I love you" type. Oh dear lord, could you imagine anyone (besides Oshitari) saying those lines?

That name is going to follow me EVERYWHERE. T_T

<3

[stillskies]

It is. And I can't. XDXDXD

<3