[One-shot] Illusionary Scenes From An Italian Restaurant (or, Never Saying Adieu) (Prince of Tennis)

[aiwritingfic]

Title: Illusionary Scenes From An Italian Restaurant (or, Never Saying Adieu)
Characters: Tezuka, Fuji, Sanada, Atobe. Mentions of other Rikkai and Seigaku characters.
Rating: Gen
Wordcount: 960, because I didn't think it needed 40 more words.
Summary: An alternate (happy) ending for the Adieu arc, where everyone lives to a ripe old age.
A/N: atama_ga_itai

Comments

[darth_claire]

Damn! It ends happily and you STILL made me cry! But now I'll be able to reread The Playground without thinking in the back of my mind that Tezuka's going to die soon. nicely written as always.

[aiwritingfic]

*loves you* Yeah. Now I can WRITE it without thinking that, too. <3 Thank you.

[darth_claire]

oh you'll be writing more of the yummy smexy playground? yay!

[aiwritingfic]

LOL--something set in the universe, yes, but solo this time without atama_ga_itai, and it takes a while because ... smut demands a mood. ^_^

[achariya]

ahhhhhh...mono no aware desu ne...

i like the moments that you drew in the middle of their lives. a few lines that tell of growing old together, and what they did to enjoy themselves. lovely!

three apartments in a row. three men too proud to live together, ne? hee.

thank you. that made me angst in a happy way.

[aiwritingfic]

*laughs* Single-room apartments, and also because they are living below the radar. It's just ... not done, as my Japanese students say. I asked them what they thought of men sharing an apartment, and they all went "... it's not Japanese."

[aiwritingfic]

Also, thank YOU. The bunny was love.

[cris_kanaschiro]

*speechless*

Well... it was... touchy!! ;___;
*crying again*

Happy ending, but still... Tezuka's death! And Fuji and Sanada died too! ;___;
Oh, but I loved this chapter!!
Sanada, Tezuka and Fuji together!!

"I've missed you both", that made me cry hard! ;___;
*still crying*

Ohh, I loved you! Thanks for sharing this!! *_*

[aiwritingfic]

*snuggles you* <3 Thank you. I guess since they are happy tears it's okay to cry? *hugs and loves*

[daredtygrz]

Awwwwwwwwwww...lol Tez left Fuji and Sanada sniping at each other in the afterlife? lol Now they have to get along. *snicker*

(and you know I love Atobe here ^_^)

More more?

[aiwritingfic]

*laughing* They'd have to get along without Tezuka for a little while wouldn't they? In any case I guess they managed, since both of them showed up to take him home.

That means a lot from one of my loved Atobes! <3

*snuggles you* Sweetheart, that was it, happily-ever-after! Unless you mean in-between. <3

[daredtygrz]

lol and probably arguing on the way who got to greet Tezuka first. XD

Oh psh...>.> *blush*

lol I mean more ficcage in general! (damn I need to try and finish that Oshi/Atobe part for you...)

[aiwritingfic]

LOL! <3 Yes, yes. I signed up for so many fic challenges it is difficult writing them all. I am working on it! <3

[vintersaga]

*wipes away happy tears* I liked Fuji and Sanada arguing. ^_^

I found it incredibly sweet that they climbed the Matterhorn together and a bit ironic that Tezuka was the last to go. But I mean it in a good way!! XDD

On his deathbed, Tezuka smiled suddenly, and lifted his hand in a welcoming gesture. "Hello again. I've missed you both," he said quietly to thin air.

Then he laid his hand down beside him, and closed his eyes forever. Loved this!

[aiwritingfic]

*snuggles you and loves* The Matterhorn was the first one I wrote. And yes, I KNEW Tez would be the last to go in the end--the twist of irony. That, and he would be the only one who wouldn't commit suicide after the others left.