Texas Two-step, Chapter 2

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Authors: A Texan and a Welsh girl, aka app1e_pi and lord_alexander, aka Pi and Sal, aka make-believe Billy and Dom.
Rating: Let's just be honest and say NC-17, shall we? We'll get there soonish, I promise.
Pairing: A dash of Mona, a pinch of Boyd. (I'll have one of those, ta.)
Warnings: We are mad. In the Britishish sense of the word. Also: Pi has been to the area where

Comments

[msilverstar]

What's the worst could happen?

In a Pi and Sal fic? OMG anything :-) :-) :-)

I once wrote a creaky bed, but it wasn't nearly as good as your creaky bed. Wow I love your writing.

[fitofpique]

The cold wasn't much affecting his… ahem… manliness, either. Interesting, that.

Very interesting. I wouldn't mind hearing more about Billy's ... ahem ... manliness. Or Dom's manliness. Or anything at all about the adventures of said aforementioned manlinesses.

Do you think there might be a possibility of this sort of thing in forthcoming chapters?

[juniper200]

"We've come on holiday by mistake,"

Withnail and Bill!

[cathgon54]

I was thinking exactly the same thing as juniper200

That being said, I LOVE the way you two write. The way the guys both want the same thing (such as shagging each other senseless) but can't see past their own noses for it is hysterically rendered. So few writers can combine humor and smut well and virtually no one does it as well as you two. Quoting my favorite lines would be senseless since I'd juct end up reposting everything. I can't wait for the next part.

[khrysty]

:o) I really like this so far. Your writing blends well together and also is written in such a way that it creates a picture in the readers' minds... which I think is a great accomplishment for any writer - let alone two. So, rock on with your bad selves! Am looking forward to the following chapters. (No pressure to rush, though)