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Proceed With Caution

Dec 10, 2014 14:32

Title: Proceed With Caution (3/6)
Author: appassionata1
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Word Count: 2,650 (chapter 3)
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are property of CBS and Telenext Media. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: When sixteen year old Luke Grimaldi goes missing while on a ski trip with friends, a top secret organization lead by Noah Mayer ( Read more... )

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Comments 14

sarahsezlove December 10 2014, 21:43:25 UTC

The plot thickens.
Just wondering how old Noah is.

appassionata1 December 18 2014, 19:59:02 UTC

It will thicken even more :) Noah's age is left up to the reader to decide. Thanks so much for your review.

valenti1965 December 11 2014, 06:15:51 UTC

Ah how sad that Luke feels too ashamed to even return home. Glad Noah has gone with him! The plot thickens! Glad Noah and his dad are ok now with one another. I'm sure Noah liked what he saw Luke ;-)

Another great chapter Faye!

appassionata1 December 18 2014, 20:01:09 UTC

Thanks so much Lou. Poor Luke is a bundle of nerves and Noah enters his life at the right moment.

hollyoaks1021 December 11 2014, 18:30:41 UTC

So Noah's completed his assignment in bringing Luke back but can't quite bring himself to leave his side just yet. I can see this being the start of a wonderful friendship..and who knows where it will lead. What ever happens Luke will be completely protected with Noah on his side.

Great chapter

appassionata1 December 18 2014, 20:02:57 UTC

Thanks Sally. Noah had a soft spot for Luke the first time he saw him. Can you blame him?

scj0710 December 12 2014, 00:31:40 UTC

Great first meeting for Luke and Noah - I could go on and on…. Gotta mention Winston again - really enjoy him and the fact that he is a bit concerned about Noah’s decision to stay but trusts Noah. Already Noah has brought smiles to Luke’s life. I am soooooo loving Proceed with Caution!

appassionata1 December 18 2014, 20:28:33 UTC

Thanks so much. I'm so happy you're enjoying it. Winston is still a bit protective of his badass ex-Marine son. He knows how tender his heart is.

wheelie47 December 14 2014, 12:05:53 UTC

Great chapter, Faye.

I always find it interesting when their roles are switched around and Noah is the out and proud gay man. He could be really good for Luke here - showing him it's ok to be gay and the world won't hate him. And maybe something more will develop!

Will Noah proceed with caution, I wonder?

And just what will they do about Damien?

Really like Noah and Winston's relationship here.

appassionata1 December 18 2014, 20:32:27 UTC

Thanks so much Anne. Sen. Grimaldi will make an appearance soon. So glad you're enjoying it :)