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[apostrophe_ess]

Title: Hot, fat and ugly
Author: apostrophe_ess
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to JKR, I merely gain from playing these games in her playground.
Pairing/Character: pregnant!Lily/James and Sirius Black
Word Count: 726
Rating: G
Prompt: For potterverse100, number 28 - weather. Prompt table here
Summary: Living in London had seemed ideal until now, and right now to

Comments

[vanillacocktail]

Awww I love it! I like how you included Sirius, not many stories really do now, like oneshots. Very cool and cute! I liked the hot, fat and ugly comment and James contradiction to it. I also like how you always post them just at the right time for me to read them!!! *Smile*

Wonderful as always!!!

[apostrophe_ess]

Yay! I'm glad that you do. I'm not often brave enough to write Sirius, I don't think I do him very well, so he usually only gets a minor appearance - this type of thing is perfect for minor apperances!

Thank you!

[vanillacocktail]

Well I thought you did Sirius very nicely! His little "I'll go, remark was the cuteness!!

[chocolate_limes]

Hugely pregnant and trapped in an airless flat, on her own with no-one to talk to except a baby who not only couldn’t hear her, but preferred squashing her bladder, and kicking her in the ribs and generally taking up more room than he was entitled to take up in someone else’s body.

I love this line, it's brilliant! Snape would say Potter's still as ungrateful and horrible to be around even now... ;)

And a mention of Snivellus. Hurrah! I love the idea for this and feel sorry for poor Lily, it must be horrible.

[apostrophe_ess]

I'll have to remember not to put Snape on the filter for these stories, just in case he uses the content against Harry in the future!

I'm glad you liked it. I'm really pleased I have these little stories to write as they are quite soothing, are fun, and there's no pressure about them.

Thank you!

[guesswork_]

I really like the way you choose the moments for your stories. This one shows how Lily, James and Sirius were also young once, and that they had enough mischief in them to enjoy life. Despite the war and the dangers and the responsibilities of having a child. Good job!

[apostrophe_ess]

I'm always afraid to write Sirius, and Remus. I don't think I can do them (them and a long list of other characters too), so including little snippets is good for me. I'd love to have seen the group of them when they were just out of Hogwarts, had their own homes, etc. I bet they were great fun.

Thank you for always commenting. I really appreciate the encouragement.

[xprincessbloomx]

Heehee. Pregnant!Lily is just too funny. Especially with James trying to soothe her. :) And Sirius with his motorcycle, I suppose! XD Great work.

[apostrophe_ess]

Yes, it was Sirius's motorbike. I might try and include it again one day, in fact I most likely will. *giggles* I'm remembering including it once before in a scene where he and James were on it and had to land in a field full of cows because it had run out of fuel. The only way to get it going again was to pee in the tank and transfigure the pee to fuel. How naughty!

Thank you for always being there. I love having the encouragement.

[xprincessbloomx]

Using pee for fuel? Intriguing. Could you link to that story? Pleeease?

[apostrophe_ess]

This is the actual post where it was written, the start of the scene is in the previous post. It's not particularly wonderfully "finished" as it was for NaNoWriMo and the idea was to write a 50,000 word story in 30 days. So you'll find spelling errors and grammatical errors all over the place, no doubt. Hope you enjoy it!