It was opulence defined.
Gold glittered throughout, drapes of crimson, snow, and raven fabric hanging from ceilings that brushed the heavens. The marble floor reflected the entirety of the room, revealing a parallel world beneath the polished rock; the masked couples and their shadows glided across the shining surface in perfect synchronization,
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I'm rambling, sorry. Just...keep up the amazing writing ♥
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And you're not rambling! I can't tell you how much these comments mean to me; I love to read them and get a feel for how the readers are viewing the story. :)
When you tell me it brings you back, it means that I must be doing something right since you keep reading; when you tell me my twists are unexpected, it means that I'm not quite as transparent as I think I am. I suppose the ending is only so obvious to me since I'm writing it, LOL. XD
But, y'know, you've always been there offering me encouragement and praise, and I really appreciate it. X3 I'm still really self-concious and shy about my writing, and you (and all the other readers on the meme) make me feel good about my writing (and make me want to write more). So, just remember it's for you guys. ^///^
And I meant what I said in the author's note; it's not over until the last word is read and your gaze falls upon the words 'The End.' I still have a few more tricks up these sleeves. ^o~
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I want to say don't be, your writing is amazing and you shouldn't be self-conscious and shy about it, but then I would be a hypocrite. So I'm just going to say, your writing is amazing, and you shouldn't feel that way about it :D
And I meant what I said in the author's note; it's not over until the last word is read and your gaze falls upon the words 'The End.' I still have a few more tricks up these sleeves.
That's what has me worried XD I think that little author's note scared me more than the whole rest of the fic. I can't even begin to fathom what you have up your sleeve...but I can't wait to find out <3
I do hope that you're enjoying writing this at the very least XD I'm not sure if you had a sequel in mind when you started Red Fall, and I would feel quite guilty if you're not at the very least enjoying it ^^;
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My god. I was right.
This is amazing--No, breath takingly wonderful. In the beginning I read each paragraph at least three times, pausing to writhe and twist in pleasure at the great godlike writing. Now that I've come to the sequel, I shift in my seat, happy there's more. It's so long...
It's so good.
Descriptive, tasteful, very in character.
I'm not sure how to tell you just how amazing this story is. I've been reading for hours now and I love it so much that it's ridiculous. Please keep continuing all the way to the end. I'm looking forward to it as well as anything else you may write!
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One more thing, “Matthew Williams,” Ivan purred, his low, sickly tone resounding through the quiet room." Excuse me while I try glueing my soul back together...
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