[suho/kai] worship

[apocryphalic]

title: worship
pairing: junmyeon/jongin
rating: nc-17
words: 6,221
summary: junmyeon likes to remind jongin how beautiful he is.
a/n: pure, unapologetic smut served with a side of sentimentality. written to hozier's take me to church on loop.

Comments

[carcharias1130]

Oh my lord that was just...wonderful. Achingly hot, of course, but also just...so well written. (I guess those go hand-in-hand). Your dialogue and characterizations were so consistent and clear...and your delivery and pacing was just very smooth and well-timed. That last paragraph--that was just a perfect ending line.

I'm just completely left in awe, that was so, so well done. Wow. Just wow. Looking forward to more works from you, definitely.

[apocryphalic]

thank you so much! i'm glad you enjoyed it, lol i don't even normally write smut and i think about 99% of the fics i write are rated r so this was a bit challenging haha. i'm also really glad that you thought the characterizations were consistent, i was afraid that i made suho a bit too ooc because i imagine he's so controlled all the time that that mask has to come off when he's at home at least!

thanks again for commenting! :) i hope to write more too xD

[naegastar]

This was such a beautiful read ;; I absolutely love the dynamic between Sukai here ♥

[apocryphalic]

:x i was most worried about the dynamics between them and suho's characterization in particular, lol. it's my first exo fic after all and since my bias is actually yixing, i can't say i am 100% confident in either my suho or kai so it's a relief that no one found them off here!

thanks a lot for the comment and for reading! :)

[charliebnim]

Damn dude ㅠㅠ

[apocryphalic]

yo T__T well, lol. thanks for reading XD i don't even write smut normally rofl idek what happened here xD

[kiki_bw]

this was so so beautiful, i could just feel their love and affection and every time junmyeon told jongin that he was beautiful, my heart just thumped a little because that was so beautiful.
a great, great fic. i really love this ♥

[apocryphalic]

omg, the entire time i was writing this i kept thinking I JUST WANT SUHO TO WORSHIP KAI ; ; and i imagined what it'd be like to have someone constantly tell you you're so handsome and sexy but that's different from being told that you're beautiful, you know? gaaah lol, i'm glad i got that feeling across!

thanks a lot for reading :) ♥ and for commenting as well!

[loveclouds]

WELL WELL WELL. I SEE THIS IS MY FIC HERE THAT BELONGS TO ME? /settles/

I KNEW YOU WOULD WRITE SUKAI BEFORE ANYTHING ELSE, SEE, I TOLD YOU. i told you and you didn't believe me because OH BUT YIXING you said but like i said, oh, but SUKAI, and here it is, all this beautiful steamy smut...i hope you're looking forward to the second sukai you write because it's coming around the corner no matter how hard you try to go in another direction HAHAHAHA HA HA HA HA.

i'm done gloating i promise :x I'M JUST HAPPY OKAY ヾ(o✪ω✪o)ｼ

It stayed with him, mainly because Junmyeon also stayed with himMY FAVORITE LINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. even when you were like 300 words into this fic i /already knew this is what was gonna bring me to my knees/ and my intuition was correct. i couldn't stop thinking it the entire time i was reading because OH MY GOD with all the uncertainty of trainee life and maybe debuting, maybe not, and maybe all the friends you make dropping out of training or being shuffled to another group, it matters SO

[apocryphalic]

[loveclouds]

HAVE YOU SEEN ALL THE GIFS/PICS/VIDS OF KAI JUST FUCKING /STARING/ AT HIM TALKING????? I think kai just has a habit of doing that tbh but since suho is next to him and talking all the time as a leader does, there are just so many intense staring moments lmaoooo. USE IT AS FIC FODDER FOR THE NEXT SUKAI FIC OKAY 8D

And i promise i will write you zyx eventually. I really will. 8D <3