Fic: The Two of Us

[aphedas]

Everyone needs someone who cares when they die. Andrew/Warren. Andrew's POV.

Comments

[vanilla_tiger]

Great story. I think this was my favourite line:

Andrew decided that Sean Connery would be his favourite Bond from now on.

Shows how much he cared so subtly.

[aphedas]

Thanks. :) Yes that was my favourite line too. I'm glad I ignored my old English teacher who always said "If there is any line in a story you can't bear to part with, drop it."

[wickedprincess3]

Can I archive this at Funnel Cakes and Flying Monkeys? very good job. :)

[aphedas]

Wow! Yes, of course, I love that site. I'm glad you liked it enough to want to. But can I edit it slightly first and e-mail it to you as a Word doc? There are still some lines on re-reading I'm not happy with.

[wickedprincess3]

Sure :) whenever its ready just send it over (word doc is fine. Mail it to wickedprincess3@aol.com
I'm glad you like the site.

[neffable]

My god, this is utterly heartwrenching!

Loved this line:
Andrew decided that Sean Connery would be his favourite Bond from now on. He wanted to tell Jonathan this, but Jonathan was asleep.

Great job!

[aphedas]

Thanks. I was hoping it didn't come across as just maudlin. Btw, I totally <3 your icon. It's a brilliant cap, Andrew looking so pathetically in love, Warren absolutely oblivious.