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kitmerlot1213 July 22 2013, 14:32:59 UTC
This was a gorgeously emotional update!

“Because as soon as I get this baby out of me, I’m going to punch her in both of her faces… really hard,” she finished, smiling wider. I always loved how protective Linda was of Lois in this story and truthfully, if EDLois had reacted to Lana this way, it would have gone a long way towards me liking her. EDLois and Chloe were shown to have a close bond but when it came to Lana, EDLois praised her out the wahzo. Extremely strange if you ask me.

The Clark/Lana confrontation was a thing of beauty and I especially loved how Clark called her on her every manipulation, lie and half-truth. She always did live in a delusional world where she never did anything wrong and her every action was justified.

“All I see right now is that you got everything you wanted and no consequences at all. Good for you.” This is Lana's life in a nutshell and guaranteed there are people buying into her every word.

Truly lovely work on this fic :)

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apeygirl July 22 2013, 14:41:37 UTC
Aw, thanks! I've put so much into this fic and I'm so grateful for all the readers, like you, who've stuck with me through this long-ass ride.


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