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dreamsofbluesky May 14 2006, 14:17:57 UTC
That first line already made me pause and stare. It's so...short, but so damn creative and descriptive and...yea. And then the ending~!

'-but death's mere prelude.' and

'Even atop the rafters, he is no closer to the moon.'

You're so good. You are SO GOOD. Everytime I read fics like this I get scared that maybe I really can't write. At least, nothing compared to this.

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aperu_sama May 14 2006, 23:30:08 UTC
Firstly, thank you. THANK YOU. You’re so sweet. *____*

But this! ”Everytime I read fics like this I get scared that maybe I really can't write.” *facepalms* Nonononono. Your writing is gorgeous. Your Nejiten is like a punch to the gut. I LOVE what you write. And I’m incapable of anything as lengthy as your pieces because I’m so terribly reliant on imagery. >.<

So there. XD

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aperu_sama May 17 2006, 04:02:46 UTC
^____^ Thank you.

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measuringlife May 17 2006, 01:43:05 UTC
The imagery is utterly gorgeous here ♥ *sparkles at you*

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aperu_sama May 17 2006, 04:03:08 UTC
*sparkles back* ♥

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