Comments | apera: Den Standhaftige Tinsoldat / The Steadfast Tin Soldier [1/?]

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Den Standhaftige Tinsoldat / The Steadfast Tin Soldier [1/?]

Oct 14, 2009 20:54

Author/Artist: Apera
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Denmark/Norway
Rating: PG?
Warnings: None
Summary: Den, a small, toy iron soldier finds himself infatuated with a silent ballerina that had been brought into the small workshop he calls home.

( They were toys. It was as simple as that. He was a small, tin-iron soldier and she was an even smaller ballerina made out of the finest porcelain. )

rating:pg, chapter1, denmark, norway, fic, hetalia, denmark/norway

Comments 35

ryoku_chan October 15 2009, 05:26:03 UTC

This is beautiful, I'm really looking forward to the next installment!

apera October 15 2009, 11:56:03 UTC

Thank youuuuuuuu!

I hope you like the next one as much as this one, but I make no promise as to when it comes out unfortunately (work tonight, college and going out with friends tomorrow, work all weekend... ;-; I need to learn to time manage)

otakuso October 15 2009, 09:01:30 UTC

Don't be SHHHHYYYYY!!!!

This is GREAT!! BEAUTIFUL!!

AND I thank you for x-posting this to Kalmar <3<3<3<3
and this pairing really needs more love, so x-post it like there's no tomorrow!! <3

And the image you linked in a commnent... *saves it <3*

H.C Andersen why soo eeeeeepiiiiicc *Has his books!!*

apera October 15 2009, 11:59:39 UTC

Omg thank you <3<3<3

B-but kalmar is filled with epic people that I pale in comparison to ;-;

It really does, they get ignored so much lately it gets me down XD

That image... I think it made me weep a little bit just looking at it ;-;

Omg I'm so jealous- I keep meaning to buy them but I don't have enough money to at the moment ;-;

pickledgundam October 15 2009, 12:49:23 UTC

Aaaahh! Always loved this fairytale ♥♥ And great writing!! ♦

apera October 17 2009, 16:17:32 UTC

Ahhh, it's one of my all time favourites too! :D

And thank you <33

imadera October 15 2009, 19:20:07 UTC

DDDDD; Doooon't eeeend it traaagicallyyyy! D: ... XD; That picture is tragic enough. Ahaha.

letthemhavepie October 16 2009, 02:57:14 UTC

I don't usually comment on stuff (mainly because I haven't really gotten my livejournal account set up. For goodness sake's I don't even have an icon yet...) But I absolutly love this! You really sholdn't be so hard on yourself you have a beautiful simplicity to your writing that is just gorgeaus with your syntax. It really seems like a well written child's story. I love. love LOVE the paragraph, "But despite these faults...feel captivated by the very mystery that she was" It makes the connection between the characters much more strong and the true passion there is just so...Goodness it love it. I was almost in tears at the paragraph (blame the lack of sleep I have been getting). Plus I'm a sucker for H.C Anderson remakes...(I did one for a final in my plays and playwrites class.)Enough of my ranting Fabulous job and please write more you have a talent (ans perferrably finish this story)

apera October 17 2009, 16:18:37 UTC

Atgyuiougtuyldijshvfygpou;ilojgvcxtf8iwkh!!!?!!?!

OMG, THANK YOU SO MUCH ;A;

I don't think it's that great but I'm really happy you do <333

letthemhavepie October 17 2009, 18:53:57 UTC

Danggity straight. When I was a kid I was so upset at the ending of Disney's Little Mermaid. I was like, "Mommy where's the suicide?!" It would totally make that story better... (I think my mother realized then that she gave birth to a very strange child)

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satoru_13 October 16 2009, 05:02:30 UTC

I-I'm in love with this story---- Denmark is--- so---- ASDFGHJKL ADORABLE----

...SECOND CHAPTER I WILL STALK FOR

satoru_13 October 16 2009, 05:17:59 UTC

GAAAHH I'M SO SORRY FOR DOUBLE-POSTING BUT I'VE RE-READ THE STORY AGAIN AND ASDFGHJKL LOVE IT SO MUCH

My coherency...

I'm sorry, OTL

apera October 17 2009, 16:19:41 UTC

Double posting is more than good!!

I know- Denmark is such a cute little dork when in love *A*

And I'm really, really happy that you're enjoying it so much ;3;