TITLE: Always first AUTHOR: mylodon PAIRING: Horatio and Archie RATING: PG CHALLENGE PROMPT:First Times AUTHOR'S NOTE: I don't own these two, but they are the best toys in the box to play with. ( Read more... )
Oh, boys. The second paragraph totally socks me in the gut--seems very Horatio, to just sit on all that guilt and not be willing to be free of it. Beautifully done, all told.
Thank you so much. Our lads - so adorable, so sad.
The second paragraph reflects a constant image I have of Horatio at present; clinging to all his guilt for some sort of comfort. Need to write it out of the system.
(You always come back to grace -- and this story personifies it perfectly. That Archie risks his life for Horatio alone; that is grace, and nothing more or less. Fantastic!)
The last paragraph especially is harsh and exquisite in equal parts.
Thank you sweetheart. Archie is full of grace, in many ways. When he determines that he'll go back to Ferrol for Horatio's honour that's just such an example of it.
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You still await the time he risks his life for you alone.
And the last paragraph was just perfect. You packed so much emotion into this story.
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Poor Archie; he does suffer beautifully, but most of all he suffers. *sighs*
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The second paragraph reflects a constant image I have of Horatio at present; clinging to all his guilt for some sort of comfort. Need to write it out of the system.
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(You always come back to grace -- and this story personifies it perfectly. That Archie risks his life for Horatio alone; that is grace, and nothing more or less. Fantastic!)
The last paragraph especially is harsh and exquisite in equal parts.
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That last part was so hard to write...
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