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aorin

FFXII Fic: Marks and Memories

Sep 27, 2007 23:19

Never am I ever writing for any other challenge with deadlines X3 I'm just not capable in meeting the deadlines, and I will feel extremely bad for dropping the claims, or posting up late because time and brains doesn't permit me otherwise. That's it! After the next bout of
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p: basch/ashe, !fic, f: ffxii

Comments 12

mithrigil September 27 2007, 16:08:42 UTC

Some fabulous imagery in this, especially the last urgent kiss. It builds up very well!

aorin September 30 2007, 06:52:46 UTC

Thank you!

Inner ramblings of a perverse mind in the middle of the night XD Actually, I'm quite unsure about the final portion of the story, but I'm glad I went for it in the end.

valeria_15 September 27 2007, 16:16:45 UTC

*mems*

I love the way you write these two. *sighs*

aorin September 30 2007, 07:00:43 UTC

Thanks <3

The dynamics between Basch and Ashe is such fun to write, it feels almost forbidden and yet, so much sexy, and so much angst XD My secret guilty pleasure and obsession ;)

diorelli September 27 2007, 18:59:38 UTC

Fantastic! I really enjoyed reading this :)

I thought it would be a "Aww, poor Basch"(tm) moment, but the last scene nicely made it up to him :P. Anyway, nicely done.

aorin October 2 2007, 23:14:00 UTC

Thanks!

All of us ought to join the 'Campaign for Basch Abuse' or something similar. As much as we love him, having him suffer is like a constant among the authors. XD

Heee... at least he got back something for a change XD I suppose Ashe didn't expect to find him upset by her unresponsive gestures. In some way, she was comparing him and the past, but I guess this comes to show how much she took him for granted and only to realize her great lost later.

... Also, Ashe was thinking, "Wait, we haven't even explored below the waist!" XD

PS: If you plan on starting on the challenge, do grab that Basch/Ashe: Lover100 challenge icon above ;)

diorelli October 4 2007, 21:06:29 UTC

*saved* Thanks!

I have a confession to make. I haven't been working on any fics or my 1sentence of late. >_<

<---- This man has been keeping me busy :D. (Watch out Basch!)

mariagoner September 29 2007, 15:02:12 UTC

Oh wow... I think this is probably the sexiest fic you've written so far. So many people have played around with the Ashe-sees-other-people-when-she-beds-someone dynamic but I really love the melancholy yet ultimately triumphant underpinnings of this piece. And mmm... Basch! How can anyone resist the way he wants her so badly here?! ::melts into a puddle::

And don't worry about the whole commenting thing! I've been like a ghost on LJ as of late so I totally understand when RL stuff just... steals your ability to play online. ::sigh::

aorin October 4 2007, 07:29:13 UTC

Heee.. glad to hear that you enjoyed it XD

Seriously, I don't know how you ladies do it so easily. I guess the imagery wouldn't be to hard (and such fun!! ;), considering that it is rather mild, but... I pretty much have to cover the screen everytime someone walks past XD Yes, this scenario is pretty common, but everyone does it differently, and it works fine with the prompt :)

I would think that Ashe was appalled to find that she has offended Basch unknowingly, and he haven't even gone below the waist. She had to do something to get him to continue ;) Though, I'd probably die if I had to write Part 2

*sigh* I feel bad about disappearing on and off all the time and take almost forever to reply all the comments.

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aorin October 4 2007, 07:35:49 UTC

I'm glad you find this to your liking, I was quite nervous about how this fic would actually turn out since this is not something I write commonly ^^;;

With Basch and Ashe, their relationship runs the other way round, everything that really matters gets fog but other things and they only come to realize what they have lost later. Also, Poor Basch have to give three times before he gets something in return!