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The Dark Side of My Heart

Jul 14, 2010 20:57

Title: The Dark Side of My Heart
Author: Aoki_Unleashed
Pairing: YB/TOP/Teddy
Genre: Romance, Angst, Smut, AU
Rating: R
Word count: 6,445
Warning: Incest, Submissive TOP!,Possessive YB, and Mpreg

Summary: Just like the dark side of the moon, my heart is hidden from the world, you, and even myself because it is inscribed with secrets that should never be ( Read more... )

yg_multibang, genre: smut, pairing: tobae, pairing:top/teddy, length: oneshot, genre: angst, genre: romance, rating: nc-17

Comments 9

newyorness July 20 2010, 21:46:37 UTC

Aww loved the story so much and how it ended with them and their kid. Too adorable of a story including all the ups and downs. Also love the music u were listening too Miyavi!! :)

aoki_unleashed July 21 2010, 02:31:19 UTC

thanks : ) a lot of people were like the malexmale pregnancy is weird but i think its cute ( in a perfect world women would be dominate and men would have babies lol).

Miyavi is is pretty awesome: )

Thanks for reading and commenting... you made me smile *hugs*

newyorness July 21 2010, 02:34:59 UTC

Totally its every girls dream to have the men giving birth instead of us having too go through the pain. Lol! Oh yea have too say that I love ur pic of Taemin.

aoki_unleashed July 21 2010, 02:51:34 UTC

men are so lazy, they get to have all the fun (sex) and none of the work(child birth) LOL.
i think teamin's new hairstyle makes him look much older and very attractive.

Thread 5

kdsaj2 July 26 2010, 22:48:34 UTC

WOAH !! I LIKEEEEEEE a lot,
even the mpreg <3
is it odd that i had a dream similar to this too ? :O

anyways amazing !! props to you...

aoki_unleashed July 26 2010, 22:53:40 UTC

you had a dream like this? thats crazy

I found it kinda hard to write submissive top because i can never imagen him being a bottom.

A lot of people though the mpreg was wierd but i love mpreg

I'm glad you liked it : ) thanks for reading & commenting *hugs*

kdsaj2 July 26 2010, 22:55:37 UTC

I know and yeah it's even more weird becuase i couldn't imagine a bottom TOP either xD
i was like "woaahhhhh, cosmic much..." xD

I read some really good mpreg fics so i'm really okay with it ^^

*hugs*

til0n February 20 2011, 01:42:57 UTC

I don't know what possessed me to read this, maybe that it is 2.30 in the morning and I wanted to read something that didn't involve GD^^
I usually doesn't read mpreg, but everything else in the description made want to read this......and -apart from the mpreg- it was just totally awesome!:)

thnx for a great bedtime story^^