This Is Your Life: Chapter Thirteen

[aoitsukikage]

Notes:

1. Well…I like the second half of this chapter, at least xP I’m never confident in my semi-smutty writing, so don’t expect me to ever say I like any of it. However, we DO get the appearance of Gin and Jyabs was super fun to write since I haven’t written much of him in the past :P

2. Did anyone actually read what was going on in

Comments

[popkin16]

Amazing, as always ♥ I love Luffy pestering Lucci about what pigeons eat. And Lucci should just give in and hook up with Kaku, they're made for each other~ I loved that Sanji and Zoro have really hooked up! I've been looking forward to it for so long...

I'm already eager for next week's installment :D

[aoitsukikage]

Thanks :)

Haha, with Luffy thinking about food all the time, the question was inevitable xP And I really wasn't sure what to do with the whole Lucci/Kaku thing when I started to write, but since the responses have been so favorable (I had no idea so many people liked the pairing) I've been adding things in later chapters.

[yume76]

i love the icon for this chapter. sanji looks so dandy. *sigh* and thank you so much for posting another chapter so soon. you just made my day. *huggles*

[aoitsukikage]

The icon is from the tenth anniversary OP book, which generally has a lot of stuff I can't read in it (but I like looking at the pictures!) and there's a few pages on Sanji and that's one of the pictures (since I'm a guitar player as well I had to turn it into an icon).

Thanks :)

[theotherdenise]

Your smut writing is plenty hot, no worries. I like you write Jyabura, he's a fun character XD

“Oi, pigeon guy! You’re pigeon guy, right? But where’s your pigeon? I’m hungry. Hey, what do pigeons eat? Hey, Ace, what are we eating tonight? Oi…” LOL that is just so spot on for Luffy XD

I am still distracted by the cover of 544. I'm sure some important stuff happened in the chapter, but I can't actually remember any of it ;__; Except that I'm starting to like Crocodile now?

[aoitsukikage]

Jyabura is like an explosion waiting to happen, which is why he's fun to write xP

And I just see Luffy getting easily distracted, which is why I write him so random.

And I know, right? Croc is like really growing on me, and I'm not sure if it's a good or a bad thing the only other thing that stood out was Luffy punching Blackbeard, but he had it coming.

[black_myst]

yay! i love the little bit of luccixkaku detail <3 i hope is see more of them in the future!

[aoitsukikage]

There will definitely be more Lucci/Kaku in the future, because they're one of my favorite pairings.

Glad you liked it :D

[shaolinqueen]

Love this chapter!
First off: Luffy is a genius! He's just too hilarious... XD

Secondly: yay for Sanji and Zoro! So glad to read that! *_*

And finally I totally love how you change the back injury! It's one of my favourite Sanji's parts and Zoro was so sweet!

Can't wait for more, as usual! Especially because Sanji is caming back home all alone...

P.S.
That cover killed me. I'm still trying to cope. XD

[aoitsukikage]

Luffy IS a genius. In his own way xP

I think the whole back injury thing was really important to Sanji's character, because it showed this side of him that went beyond chivalrous words and since then he's proven several times that he'd give his life to save somebody else's, so I tried to find a way to add it into the story.

P.S.: The cover is one of those things that I tell myself I won't look at any more and then find myself looking anyway...
(oh, and if you want to throw me another request for the request meme, feel free to do so, because I only have two at the moment...)