Love's Sorrow Chapter 1

Aug 24, 2011 20:37

Title: Love's Sorrow
Author: aoi_jihyo
Length: 01/20
Pairing: Yoosu
Genre: Angst/Smut/Romance
Rating: R
Warning: Possible M-preg
Summary: Junsu was aware that the man was his brother-in-law. Yoochun wasn't his and he knew it. But Junsu's darkest side still wanted him, it desired him. It was a question of pride, wasn't it?

Wasn't it?

A/N: Hey, guys! I'm back. I'm not ( Read more... )

pairing: jaechun, genre: drama, genre: romance, length: chaptered (ongoing), rating: r, genre: angst, pairing: yoosu

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ladygaffes August 25 2011, 02:00:06 UTC
I'm saving my spot. I'll be commenting properly after reading.

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karmentvxq August 25 2011, 02:38:16 UTC
The last line is weird but everything else is going fine...

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aoi_jihyo August 25 2011, 02:48:16 UTC
you mean the 'he then stood up'? I'll edit it, now that I think about it...
Anyways, thanks for your comment

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uchihahikari August 26 2011, 23:47:21 UTC
It's my first time reading your fics, but this one I really like it. Please update fast, I'm really looking forward to the plot and the characters development, specially I want to know Yoochun's thoughts

Thanks for writing

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aoi_jihyo August 27 2011, 21:59:32 UTC
Thank you for your comment ^^
I'll try to update as fast as I can, school is getting harder but I'll update for sure. I hope that I can transmit the characters feelings in the chapters to come ^^

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kimmy_lin August 27 2011, 01:16:29 UTC
Goshhhh!!! Can I reply in spanish..my english is not that good.

Asi que xD KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!! como e sposible que no hya leido esto antes!!! Por dios!! hahhaha junsu toda la raozn cuando dicen no se vuelve mucho mas tentatvio...ok sone como un rompe hogares xDDD

Pero es que adsasdsdaddsada es imposible no desear una cosita tna linda no?....y por mucho que AMO la sooulmate esto es mucho mas grande asdasdsadas aun sigo sin comprender como es que no he leido este fic antes *se golpea*

Ok, no sueno coherente..pero es que he quedado en shock...

Así que weno... esta soy yo corriendo a leer el porximo

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kimmy_lin August 27 2011, 01:18:30 UTC
Ok almost realized there is not chapter two.....*jump of a cliff* WHEN?? WHEN??? *suffering*

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aoi_jihyo August 27 2011, 22:01:39 UTC
I'll update as soon as I can ^^

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aoi_jihyo August 27 2011, 22:01:06 UTC
bueno, este fic lo subi hace nada. Muchas gracias por dejar un comentario, no te preocupes comentar en español o ingles, para mi es lo mismo.

Y si, tienes mucha razon.

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missyoosu September 5 2011, 01:28:40 UTC
Oh, wow. Rebellious Su going after his brother's husband. Me likey!

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aoi_jihyo September 5 2011, 01:29:37 UTC
thank you ^^ me likey too, I hope others think the same ;P

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