implicit rebellion: a scorpius/rose fanfiction

[anysomething]

Title: Implicit Rebellion
Rating: PG
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing/s & Characters: Scorpius/Rose. Draco and Astoria make cameos.
Warnings: none
Words: 2879
Summary: "I can't tell if she's in love with me," he'd said to his father once, in a rare moment of candor, "or just the idea of me." A Scorpius Malfoy character study.
Disclaimer/Claimer: I play

Comments

[drcjsnider]

Damn this goood!

Love how it is set up and it flows really naturally. Really enjoyed how you describe both Rose and Scorpius and their similarities. I like the part about how she'd moved in and taken over his flat/his bed/his quidditch shirt (great detail btw). I really like how you describe part of them being together as rebellion - but that it is almost more than that. I think one of my favorite lines is that rose learned to shout from her parents and that he learned contempt and indifference from his. Also loved the line: "Scorpius blinked and blew out air, and felt, as he did about everything else Rose-related, like he'd been run over by the Hogwarts Express." It is just so right-on and descriptive. Really great stuff here! Wonderful job. :)

[anysomething]

thanks bb! ♥ you always leave me the best reviews. I've been working on this forever- maybe a month or so- and I'm glad the flow is finally working out.

[ashleyfanfic]

I love this. It's so reflective and introspective on Scorpius's part. And I love that Astoria is happy for Scorpius and Rose, as she's really the only one that hadn't been touched by the war and the bitter rivalry. Well done!

[anysomething]

thank you! :)

[galindaxxxx]

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS WAY TOO MUCH * flails * I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! * flails more *

[anysomething]

thanks bb!

[katherine_lupin]

Amazing piece!! loved it :D

[anysomething]

thank you! ♥

[tigersroar]

The details really make this fic special. Every sentence was spun like poetry, it was amazing. I loved your portrayal of Draco as well, such a difference from who he is usually characterised as - you used the quote to the best advantage. In conclusion, I just really, really loved this :)

[anysomething]

thank you! I love to write poetry as well so I'm glad I was able to bring that into this. ♥