FIC: Bad Plan

[anyagotr]

Title: Bad Plan
Author: anyagotr
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Ten, Donna Noble, OC
Rating: PG-13 (for content)
Prompt: No Prompt for this one. Just an idea that bloomed and ended up different than I thought it would.
Summary: The Doctor comes up with a plan. A very bad plan.
Disclaimer: I do not own, have any affiliation, nor know anyone that

Comments

[tkel_paris]

*shudders* Yikes. Yes, Doctor. You don't think too far ahead, do you?

My only real critique is how quickly things progressed between the Doctor and Donna once they were back in the TARDIS. I feel like her anger would have resurfaced at him and she would've demanded time to herself. Whether he would have let her or she would've insisted I'm not sure. But at most him holding her and keeping the nightmares at bay would have been a little more believable.

Mind, you are definitely good at writing creepy and dangerous stuff. Makes me worry about what we'll see in the next chapter of your multi-chapter work. (Not that it'd stop me from reading.)

[anyagotr]

Yeah, I'll have to admit, that one ended kind of weak. I can work on it again at a later time with an alternate ending, maybe? Hmm....

Oh... I'm not so sure you're going to like my next chapter in the Darkness series. I never knew I had it in me to write things so dark. O.O
I need to work on that maybe. ;)

Thank you for reading and reviewing! :D I greatly appreciate the insight!

[anyagotr]

Okay, I added more to the story. Don't think it's finished (in fact, I know it's not!). Do you think I should take the story down and then finish it? Or make it into 2 parts?

[tkel_paris]

Don't take it down. You can just upload a newer version if you want to. Maybe a sequel would be a better option?

[bas_math_girl]

As tkel_paris has already pointed out, you're very good at the eerie bits.

Donna should have slapped him one for using her as bait (or at least threatened it for future reference, if her anger had dissipated).

Yay for your muse!!! You must feel so chuffed. :D

[anyagotr]

I have to say, I love your icon! :D

And I think I'm going to take a second look at the ending of the story. I think I need to add to it, more than change it. :)

I don't know if it's a good thing that I write eerie well. Kind of freaks me out a bit. Am I that kind of weird? O.o

But yes! I am chuffed! My muse loves me. :-D Been writing on my Darkness series too. :)

[anyagotr]

So I continued with the story. Do you think should make the story into 2 parts, or should I take the story down? What do you think?

[morganfm]

wow this was very very very good. like so good. something the Doctor would do without thinking and almost cause something to happen.... it hits so many of the prominent psychological buttons in their relationship.
as for the continuation, I think I'd just make it a two parter. besides, you wouldn't have to take this down, you could just make an edit to it so that all the comments and such aren't lost. :)
can't wait to read the rest of it!

[anyagotr]

Thank you! I'm working on the next part. I think you all will like it better! ;) A good proper ending for this story!

I am SO glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you! Thank you so much!!! <3 *hugs*

[develish1]

silly Doctor really didn't think that through did he?

*sigh*

At least she's forgiven him though

[anyagotr]

We shall see... ;)

[develish1]

is there a little plot bunny helping you (and her) plan revenge perhaps? lol

[anyagotr]

There might be a little something that might be working on. ;-)