Comments | anuna_81: I'm returning a favor and look! that was fast :)

anuna_81

I'm returning a favor and look! that was fast :)

Jul 07, 2009 05:10

Title: Way past bedtime
Pairing: John/Elizabeth
Rating: NC - 17
Spoilers: none
Warnings: adult content
Disclaimer: I don't won anything but mistakes :)
A/N: for
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sga, flist!love, sparky, fic

Comments 35

wanderingsmith July 7 2009, 03:35:31 UTC

oh guuuuhhh
there is such a world of difference between annoying cocky and deservedly cocky.

Actually, that would make Carson happy. Catching up on sleep would actually mean following her doctor's orders for a change. It was good for her.
and a good dose of reality :D

and the honest, raw want, from both of them, is sexy as damn hell... well done luv

anuna_81 July 7 2009, 03:49:10 UTC

Can you tell I was inspired (after all that angst!) Thank you!!!

the_scary_kitty July 7 2009, 04:13:39 UTC

He could always carry her if she couldn't walk.

Uh, John? That's assuming you can walk in the morning... Heheheh. XD

Ohhhhh, John is such a smug bastard. He's earned it, too. Heehee!

I can so see him talking dirty to Lizzie and her loving every second of it even as she's planning her own little payback to make him beg. Yum, that's so delicious! *clappy hands*

anuna_81 July 7 2009, 04:23:21 UTC

as she's planning her own little payback to make him beg

You didn't just give me another plot bunny!

Hehe, thank you; I'm glad you liked it! Yes, he earned it ;) ;)

mouser_fluff July 7 2009, 04:38:38 UTC

Oh my...wow. Just mind-blowingly wow...

That very much made my day, thank you!

anuna_81 July 8 2009, 03:51:42 UTC

Wow, thank YOU! I'm glad to hear you liked this! :)

cassievalentine July 7 2009, 04:51:39 UTC

OMG YUM!

I think you should write us something like this once a week.

anuna_81 July 8 2009, 04:02:46 UTC

I'll make no promises, but I would like that as well :)

krisrussel July 7 2009, 06:09:34 UTC

*fans self*
That was hot!
Just insanely hot!
And as I read in the commentaries, I would also love to see a follow-up story where she's planning her own little payback to make him beg :^)

anuna_81 July 8 2009, 04:05:07 UTC

As I said, I'll make no promises ;) But I would like to do one myself.