➲ NANOWRIMO: NOVEMBER 10

Nov 14, 2013 01:26

WELP, I'm a couple days off schedule. WE'RE JUST GONNA. THING. AND NOT THINK ABOUT IT ( Read more... )

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ohmeguro November 14 2013, 18:03:40 UTC
i broke my "no reading night vale fic" rule for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bc when you see elizabeth fic in your fandoms you don't pass that shit up.

HOW. HOW HAVE YOU BUILT UP A GOOD CHARACTER STUDY AND MADE CARLOS SO REAL

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the build up of night vale as a character through carlos' eyes is so perfect bc it doesn't lose the strange wonder but the terror is just...more acutely There bc carlos notices it whereas we're used to sort of shrugging and going "ok" when we hear about it through cecil

AND THE WAY HE DISTRUSTS CECIL AND IS UNCOMFORTABLE WITH HIS SPEECHES ty ty you kept cecil so ic but made him see so threatening just from a perspective shift and that was brilliant

UUGHGHGHGHGHGH RUINING MY LIFE EVERY NANO

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azurelunatic November 15 2013, 12:49:09 UTC
This is delightful. I enjoyed the Life cereal bit particularly.

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laliandra November 15 2013, 15:50:34 UTC
eeeeeeeeeeee DARLING this is my new favourite thing, I am so delighted. Of course you and Night Vale fit, of course your Carlos is a delight, of course of course. I loved how light and zippy this felt, how completely terrifying and how joyful. Also this
It's just, every time Carlos lays eyes on Cecil (those two times so far, it's always just been his voice delivering the day's disasters, otherwise,) everything inside of him just takes notice and says, that.

That, Carlos. Tap that.

No, brain, says Carlos.

Carlos, tap that, his brain insists.

I don't want to tap that, Carlos reminds himself, even though he probably does. You know, it's most likely some kind of freaky Night Vale science, some kind of perception field or something wacky like that that makes Carlos see exactly what he wants to see. Maybe the real Cecil has no physical form.

THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO MUCH I CANNOT EVEN. Also I am telling everyone about "how's the weather" it is now canon to me. This is all canon to me. We are done here.

Also <3333333 hi

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callunavulgari November 15 2013, 18:56:35 UTC
Oh wow. Wow! I've listened to maybe three of the episodes for Night Vale, but I'm familiar enough that this doesn't completely confuse me. That said, I want to always read this. You writing awesome scientists trapped in a horribly creepy town in New Mexico is seriously the best. I'm just shivering all over, damn Elizabeth, reading your fic is like letting poetry sing to your brain. <333

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grey_bard November 20 2013, 13:32:53 UTC
This is absolutely lovely.

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