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antimaccassar

Chapter 2: Pajamas and Cheese

Jun 07, 2011 21:44

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remisims June 8 2011, 04:16:00 UTC

Wow, that was a quick turn. Elizabeth's cherry dress and smile certainly give off the wrong vibe.

antimaccassar June 8 2011, 04:39:47 UTC

Appearances can be deceiving. And Elizabeth Jones knows how to work her looks to her advantage ;)

skellington7d June 8 2011, 06:23:13 UTC

Great chapter! But you still left us hanging!

antimaccassar June 8 2011, 16:13:35 UTC

Thank you :D ! I did :P

inconnusimmer June 8 2011, 08:30:18 UTC

What a great chapter! I wonder what Elizabeth's up to? :o

antimaccassar June 8 2011, 16:16:43 UTC

Thank you!! :D

koraliene June 8 2011, 15:22:02 UTC

:ooo So awesome! I just spotted this, but it already seems great. I love the cliffhanger, and how the final shot with Elizabeth is set up. Thank you for sharing :D

antimaccassar June 8 2011, 16:25:35 UTC

Thank you :)) I did do a first chapter before my sort of hiatus, but I feel like I am really getting into it ;)

I had so much fun with lighting in that shot! So glad you liked it :D

shebsimmin June 8 2011, 16:08:40 UTC

Good Chapter! I figured Elizabeth was "off" last chapter, but I didn't expect her to be evil. I can't wait to see Alice take the bait!

antimaccassar June 8 2011, 16:26:07 UTC

Thank you! She is a complicated character, I can only hope I can pull it off :)