GinRan Contest Entry .. Fanfiction

[anticagirl]

Title: Always her

Author: anticagirl

Rating: G

Fandom: Bleach

Spoilers/warnings: Spoilers of the latest Bleach Chapters

Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or its characters.

Summery: My take on if Gin would have survived the attack by Aizen. What were the things that were going through his mind as the events occur? What would happen when he wakes up to find himself

Comments

[rinhail]

Oh God, this is so beautiful. I've always wondered what Gin was thinking, and I believe you put it pretty damn close to what Kubo Tite would do. :)

[anticagirl]

Oh wow thank u so much .. It's quite difficult knowing what Gin is thinking, especially in the last few chapters .. Quite a complex guy .. Glad I was able to keep him in charecter and in line with what Kubo protrayed him as

[manonlechat]

YES! Thank you for letting Gin survive. :D

This is very romantic and I like how you get into Gin's head. Very effective. Thanks so much for sharing!

[anticagirl]

Yush! Of course he survives .. I'm praying that he does

Getting into Gin's head can cause some brain damage .. I know I have had some while writing it .. But I think that is what makes him so great to write

Thanks for the comment ^^

[dayofcaligula]

That's about right. I feel that Gin has his own wayward way of showing affections... it's almost borderline looking like obssession. Going back as to how he grew up, it makes perfect sense how he doesn't know love. But Rangiku is breaking the boundary. In the end, he can never get himself away from her (in heartfelt's variable).

[anticagirl]

I felt that way about him too .. He isn't the type that will get all romantic with the girl but at the same time all of his life's work and scheming was done for her .. Such as interesting charecter where it doesn't seem as creepy as in other situations Which are similiar to this .. He's such a delight to write but also very complex

Thanks for the comment ^^

[afteriwake]

Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.

[sarina7667]

Very good story. I'm impressed with how believable it is, however there's a lot of proofreading to be done. If you would like me to fix grammatical and spelling errors, I would be happy to do so. My email is sarina7667@hotmail.com if you would like me to proofread and edit for you. I've done it for others in the past, please feel free to use me lol.

[anticagirl]

Thank you so much for your comment ^^ Yeah .. proof reading tends to be my main issue, with grammer and English not being my first language. I tend to get typos and stuff

Thank you so much for your offer. Will let you know if i need anyone to proof read any future work ^^

[anticagirl]

Thank you ^^

[anticagirl]

wow thank you so much on the comment ^^ Getting into Gin's mind was tough since he was a very complex charecter in a way that he thinks so i'm glad you found it accurate ^^