Pajama Pants

Nov 17, 2010 19:47


We sat together at the pizzeria by his house, I'll never forget it, and we talked about pajama pants. By this time in our relationship, may it rest in peace, pajama pants had become a symbol. They were what we longed for at the ends, mostly even at the middles of every day. I would be with him at his home and we would each be wearing a pair of his ( Read more... )

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basric November 18 2010, 01:02:23 UTC
Nicely done.

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antianhedonia November 18 2010, 02:59:55 UTC
Thank you very much.

Lovely icon for the occasion. :)

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baxaphobia November 18 2010, 01:03:44 UTC
lovely entry. a little sad as the ending of relationships can be. Glad you are free to fly though!

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antianhedonia November 18 2010, 03:00:04 UTC
Thank you, I'm quite happy about it, too. :)

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kimberry531 November 18 2010, 02:40:35 UTC
Oh my God, Sylwia, I think this is the most beautiful thing I've ever seen from you. Especiallyespeciallyespecially the last paragraph. And the ending. Flailing all over.

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antianhedonia November 18 2010, 02:58:27 UTC
Thanks, babe! I was hesitant to post it, I actually thought it wasn't as good as my other ones. lol.

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wolf November 18 2010, 02:43:53 UTC
Very, very beautiful. I love the symbolism, and how everything seems to flow so easily from section to section. The ending is especially lovely as well; the last sentence finishes very nicely! :D ♥

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antianhedonia November 18 2010, 02:58:44 UTC
Thank you so much, darling, that means a lot. I was worried I was using too many cliches.

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wolf November 18 2010, 03:06:00 UTC
Not at all! I think that this turned out perfectly. :3

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antianhedonia November 18 2010, 03:08:37 UTC

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darkspirited1 November 18 2010, 03:57:32 UTC
That's beautiful. I love the symbolism.

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antianhedonia November 18 2010, 03:59:13 UTC
Thank you! I was worried it was too cliche.

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