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Apr 18, 2006 00:09

Recipient: aviss
Title: Heat
Rating: R
Summary: Sometimes Crowley thinks English weather exists just to annoy him.
Author's Notes: This mutated half-way through so it starts as humour and turns into smut/angst. Hope you like it!

Heat )

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apple_pi April 18 2006, 07:28:50 UTC
Pun absolutely intended: This was quite hot.

:-)

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antichristmas April 18 2006, 14:20:37 UTC
*tosses ice water on you* :P

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aviss April 18 2006, 09:48:26 UTC
I love it, thanks Secret Author!

Actually I also think that English weather exists juast to annoy me, but on the opposite view as Crowley... too cold, not sunny enough. I like the way you describe it, and Crowley getting into mischief just because he is bored and hot... and then even hotter. Much love!

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antichristmas April 18 2006, 14:19:55 UTC
:) Glad you enjoyed it! My first Good Omens fic, so I was feeling a bit nervous...

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lumelle April 18 2006, 10:13:02 UTC
This was great. No other way to put it. Except, perhaps, hot.

I would rather expect Crowley to be disturbed by coldness more than heat, he was the Serpent after all, but if having him dislike warmth in favour of cold leads to something like this, I can certainly ignore my own assumptions. XD

That all said, I loved it. I loved it verily much.

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antichristmas April 18 2006, 14:18:37 UTC
Glad you liked it! Crowley also hates cold. And drizzle. And most weather in general. But too much heat reminds him of Down Below and makes him cranky. ;)

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antichristmas April 18 2006, 14:36:54 UTC
opening Crowley up like he was a seventeenth century first edition, signed.

Oh dear. That was beautiful.

(anonymously commenting cos this is a slash fic and i have RL issues)

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antichristmas April 19 2006, 11:46:46 UTC
Boo to RL issues, but yay to feedback! *hugs* Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it. ;)

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use_theforce_em April 18 2006, 17:11:10 UTC
Wow, I love the way you wrote Aziraphale in this. It's nice to see him dish it back to Crowley once in a while ;) And Crowley with the ice water - oh, what a bad bad demon....

And the last line was just perfect. I don't know why it hit me so strong, but it gave me a big *sigh* at the end.

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antichristmas April 19 2006, 14:15:08 UTC
Crowley is a brat. And I like the idea of Aziraphale being a bit of a bastard now and again - in a completely angelic way, of course. :)

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