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dust has her gentle lies (ilana, pg)

Nov 01, 2010 19:52

Title: dust has her gentle lies
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character: mother, challenge: lost_in_108, character: jacob, rating: pg, character: ilana verdansky

Comments 2

irishunicorn03 November 4 2010, 15:47:06 UTC

I was never a big fan of Ilana, but I love the way you've written her and how she meets the mother. You never fail to surprise and awe me with your writing.

flaky_artist November 5 2010, 00:16:10 UTC

Yay, Mother! :D

Even the trees are suspicious, wary of any secrets that may escape their entangled roots.

Gorgeous line, I love the imagery. Nice work!