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shadows on the pavement burn a watermark of you (pg-13, cindy/lennon)

Aug 20, 2010 16:18

Title: shadows on the pavement burn a watermark of you
Author: cloudytea
Characters/Parings: Cindy/Lennon, allusions to Colleen/Lennon.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: His eyes are tired, but a different sort of tired that comes with the territory. 758 words. For 10_prompts's Hold your breath. Not sure how I feel about this, but I'm trying to get my muse back.

( some nights, she goes down with the plane. )

pairing: lennon/cindy, rating: pg-13, character: lennon, challenge: 10_prompts, character: cindy chandler, pairing: lennon/colleen

Comments 2

revengent September 15 2010, 02:44:09 UTC

This was amazing! I could see this as a piece of orginal fiction, seriously. It was like replacing oxygen with water in his lungs -- It was simply hopeless was my favorite line.

cloudytea September 15 2010, 02:50:43 UTC

THANK YOU SO MUCH! I really appreciate your feedback! I'm really trying to work on my style, and I think this story was a turning point -- Thank you!