Title: there's a devil at your side Author: cloudytea Characters: Claire/Jacob Rating: PG-13 Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers for the entire series. Summary: He takes it all in while he still can. For lost_in_108's prompt Tomorrow.
Very interesting and well written-I’ve never read any Claire/Jacob, but I kinda dig them now! The imagery of Claire eating the mangos is vivid and clear. Those last two line are the most powerful, and really leave you with a feeling of imminent loss. Great job! :D
If you really like Claire/Jacob, I recommend flaky_artist, because she does awesome writing for them, as well as Claire/MIB. Anyways, thank you for reading, I really appreciate it! It's not a very popular pairing, but I think it could work. Again, thank you! :D
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You always have a beautiful way with words.
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