catch me if you can (Jacob/Ilana, PG-13)

Jul 06, 2010 21:45

Title: catch me if you can
Characters/Parings: Jacob/Ilana
Rating: PG-13 for adult situations.
Words: 476
Summary: Ilana is good at stealing. For flaky_artist's alphabet meme request, Chocolate.

it is years before his true intentions are revealed. )

character: jacob, rating: pg-13, pairing: jacob/ilana, alphabet meme, character: ilana verdansky, requests

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weatheredlaw July 7 2010, 05:31:23 UTC
You writing just gets stronger and stronger. I love this so much!

It takes her a while (he is a challenge), but she lures him in between silk sheets and feathered pillows. He is careful not to touch her with his hands, but his lips drive violently against her own, making her wonder what his true intentions were when he took her away from her home three years ago.

PERFECT Jacob. If he weren't her father as we suspect, he'd be such a twisted lover. I like this, I like it a lot.

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cloudytea July 7 2010, 05:34:37 UTC
^__^ Thanks, I like to think I'm getting a little bit better with each fic. Jacob's such an interesting guy. Since we don't know much about his personal side, we can pretty much twist it to anything we want. ;)

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macey July 7 2010, 20:34:58 UTC
Ahhhh, yes! I love your Ilana backstory, and your Jacob is amazing. You just keep getting better and better, omg.

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cloudytea July 7 2010, 20:35:48 UTC
Haha, why thank you. Really appreciate it ^__^

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tellshannon815 July 7 2010, 21:10:50 UTC
Interesting backstory for Ilana here!

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cloudytea July 8 2010, 04:58:14 UTC
^__^ Thank you so much for reading!

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flaky_artist July 8 2010, 04:56:28 UTC
This is beautiful, hun. I love all the little details you weave into the story, like the chocolate cake and silk sheets... It gives a lovely atmosphere to it.

And I adore the way you've written Ilana. This is exactly how I picture her when she was younger, sneaky, irreverent, and sweetly seductive. Wonderful job!

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cloudytea July 8 2010, 04:58:29 UTC
Oh, thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :D

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