Title: catch me if you can Characters/Parings: Jacob/Ilana Rating: PG-13 for adult situations. Words: 476 Summary: Ilana is good at stealing. For flaky_artist's alphabet meme request, Chocolate.
You writing just gets stronger and stronger. I love this so much!
It takes her a while (he is a challenge), but she lures him in between silk sheets and feathered pillows. He is careful not to touch her with his hands, but his lips drive violently against her own, making her wonder what his true intentions were when he took her away from her home three years ago.
PERFECT Jacob. If he weren't her father as we suspect, he'd be such a twisted lover. I like this, I like it a lot.
^__^ Thanks, I like to think I'm getting a little bit better with each fic. Jacob's such an interesting guy. Since we don't know much about his personal side, we can pretty much twist it to anything we want. ;)
This is beautiful, hun. I love all the little details you weave into the story, like the chocolate cake and silk sheets... It gives a lovely atmosphere to it.
And I adore the way you've written Ilana. This is exactly how I picture her when she was younger, sneaky, irreverent, and sweetly seductive. Wonderful job!
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It takes her a while (he is a challenge), but she lures him in between silk sheets and feathered pillows. He is careful not to touch her with his hands, but his lips drive violently against her own, making her wonder what his true intentions were when he took her away from her home three years ago.
PERFECT Jacob. If he weren't her father as we suspect, he'd be such a twisted lover. I like this, I like it a lot.
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And I adore the way you've written Ilana. This is exactly how I picture her when she was younger, sneaky, irreverent, and sweetly seductive. Wonderful job!
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