Nothing To Be Afraid Of

Sep 09, 2010 22:28

Title: Nothing To Be Afraid Of
Author: anthrop
Fandom: Hanna is Not a Boy's Name
Characters: Toni Ipress, Conrad Achenleck
Summary: Conrad cares for Toni after an unfortunate brush with silver. Vague Tonrad ( Read more... )

fruitsandwich, conrad, gift exchange, toni, tonrad, hinabn

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kaiyabeck September 11 2010, 02:01:09 UTC
There are so many things I love about this story that I don't know where to begin.

I love how consistently awkward Conrad is, all the while trying so hard to pretend he's not genuinely worried about Toni. I love the very subtle romantic tension between the both of them.

And lord do I love the dialogue. Thirty pages of conversation, awkward or otherwise, is right up my alley, and you've done an amazing job at keeping their banter entertaining and in character.

Great job on this! I'll definitely be looking out for more of your Hanna fics. ^^

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anthrop September 13 2010, 04:57:10 UTC
Thank you so much! I don't do anymuch romance often, so whenever I give it a shot I always feel like it's too vague. So I'm glad you saw it!

And oh man, dialogue and me? We're good pals. I love it muchly.

Also, this is my writing account, and it's got... four? I think four other HiNaBN fics on it if you're interested.

Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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fruitsandwich September 11 2010, 15:20:20 UTC
Pretty much what kaiyabeck said.
Also, this totally made me forget about this horrible sore throat I have and how I can't breathe through my nose at all for the entire half-hour it took to read. And that is really, really saying something, so I want to thank you, sincerely, for not only writing me schnodally awesome fic, but also being able to turn a phrase so well it completely drew me in and made me forget about my cold, if only for a little while.

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anthrop September 15 2010, 07:04:50 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this! I was actually pretty worried, since it wasn't very much like anything you wanted. I'm also happy this big bag of awkward distracted you enough from your cold (which I hope is gone by now!).

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crasherwake September 12 2010, 00:46:32 UTC
This was beautiful.

I don't ship Conrad and Toni, but I find their interactions pretty cute. And all the dialog here and Conrad's awkward adorableness is just plain great. You wrote everyone very well. I'd say especially Conrad, because I love him best... but I may be biased.

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anthrop September 15 2010, 07:22:51 UTC
Conrad is kind of addictably awkward (I'm starting to lose count of how many fics I've written with him as the central focus, haha), and Toni is adorable and kickass, so they actually manage to mesh pretty well! Don't worry, I'm just as bad.

Thank you for reading and commenting! (Also: YOUR ICON.)

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