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kimberleyafc September 1 2009, 11:35:55 UTC
This is really good. More please.

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cmc1964 September 1 2009, 13:36:40 UTC
OMG!!!! That`s a fantastic story. Can`t wait for more.

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beta please! or at very least proofread! anoyingfan September 1 2009, 23:37:27 UTC
You really really need a beta.
Really.
Or just proofread the story before posting. Some sentences do not make sense and there are many typos that would be easy to catch and fix. Really disrupts reading the story when you have to stop and try to insert the right word or re-work a sentence to make sense. I really like the concept of the story but in its current form its hard to read...

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sierrawyndsong September 2 2009, 03:40:28 UTC
Love the story!

In light of 'annoying fans' comments, should you decide you would like a Beta, I would be more than happy to Beta for you. Let me know if I can help out in any way!!

Otherwise, thanks for sharing the story with us and taking the time to write and post!

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angels3 September 7 2009, 01:24:43 UTC
Shit! No pressure there *frowns*

This is like a no win situation.

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