ShuuKira Scene 2: Winter.

Sep 08, 2008 17:02

I had originally planned to write a multi-chaptered story revolving around Hisagi and Kira on the night before the big battle. But because my not being able to get to even the second chapter in all my previous attempts at a multi-chaptered fic is an established scientific fact, I am writing a series of one-shots that are all related to each other ( Read more... )

yaoi, bleach fanfiction, shuukirascenes, 50scenes, shuukira

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shiawase_ai September 8 2008, 09:28:11 UTC
MOAR. XD

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antha_aryn September 9 2008, 02:24:35 UTC
Will try do! 8D

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ceestar September 8 2008, 09:34:15 UTC
Haah the image of the snow added to the beauty of this fic, sorry Zu, I adore winter.

Manly tears are manly, hahaha, I don't mind Shuu showing the human side of himself, he is allowed to have weaker moments too!

Squeee go Antha, go XD

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antha_aryn September 9 2008, 02:26:10 UTC
Oh, Shuu. ::cuddles::

At least Izuru's there for him, eh? XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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silverharmony September 8 2008, 09:45:52 UTC
So pretty and gorgeously vivid *____* And yes, I like Shuuhei's manly tears XD

I agree with shiawase_ai. Moar!

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antha_aryn September 9 2008, 02:26:45 UTC
YEY FOR MANLY TEARS!!!!!!!

Lol. Ai'ght will try to get more out of me soon! ♥

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arrankaara September 8 2008, 10:33:28 UTC
ah... somehow i can relate to kira. =D though somehow, talking about seasons make me relate him to autumn. somehow, i think he personifies autumn beautifully.

but but but beautiful writing as always, bb.♥ i don't think hisagi is woobie-fied here, but you know, i can feel his pain. and you wrote them beautifully together.

keep on writing!

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arrankaara September 8 2008, 10:34:49 UTC
...reading back this comment. what's with the redundancy, self???

*smacks face into brick*

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antha_aryn September 9 2008, 02:29:57 UTC
Nooooo!!!! ::reconstructs pretty face::

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antha_aryn September 9 2008, 02:28:15 UTC
Yeah, autumn would be more fitting for Kira. Autumn is so damn beautiful, it hurts. I wish we had autumn here! T_T

And thank you! I try! ♥

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calm_isolation September 8 2008, 15:18:04 UTC
Oh Antha! I love this so much I love love love love love love love quiet scenes like this that are so intimate and beautiful and you did an amazing job here you really did

and there is nothing wrong with making Shuuhei cry you cries he even cries in the manga it is okay and you handled it beautifully and I love that Kira is for once not the one crying but the one comforting it fits him so well

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antha_aryn September 9 2008, 02:29:33 UTC
^__________________^ ::beams:: Oh, you are too kind. ♥

And lol, yes, we've already seen Shuu cry, I just remembered. XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! ::squish::

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