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antfan

Tim Meets Patrick!

Sep 28, 2007 22:11

Chapter One

The country life, Tim reckoned, was definitely over-rated. All those Lakeland poets her aunty loved so much had a lot to answer for. When Lawrie was flush with the receipts of her first Hollywood blockbuster, and purchased herself a nice country retreat - with a good wine cellar and attentive butler (Tim grinned, enjoying herself now ( Read more... )

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helenprev September 28 2007, 21:30:25 UTC

I love this! You have all the characters exactly right! :-)

Is there going to be more? If so, may I add you to my friends list so I can read along?

antfan September 30 2007, 09:42:23 UTC

By all means be my friend. I think I'm going to write some more - I have the next few scenes in mind. So far, I've really been using LJ to follow Trennels - oh no, I feel myself being sucked in to journaling, fanfic and everything...

ex_lizzzar998 September 28 2007, 23:05:49 UTC

Very entertaining- i'm starting to see the possibility of Patrick and Tim in a bizarre sort pf alliance, but almost feel sorry for the Marlows

antfan September 30 2007, 09:45:53 UTC

It's great fun writing from Tim's perspective, I have to say.

mrs_redboots September 29 2007, 10:27:09 UTC

Excellent - lots more, please!

(Only very minor quibble is that I thought Nick had decided not to know about the horses so that it wouldn't hurt so badly if/when Rowan failed and had to sell them again - but then again, she could easily have changed her mind.)

antfan September 30 2007, 09:44:58 UTC

ouch - yes, I am afraid there will be some mistakes, as I don't know Run Away Home that well, though at least I now have a copy, and Attic Term I only ever read once from the library.

I'm not sure Nick could bring herself to ignore the horses forever though.

mrs_redboots September 30 2007, 21:35:29 UTC

Hee hee hee. I love it. Tim as ever unerringly putting her finger right on the very thing right away.

You're setting it in modern times, a la Forest, ie post-hunting ban? Intriguing.

mrs_redboots September 30 2007, 21:36:01 UTC

Hee hee hee. I love it. Tim as ever unerringly putting her finger right on the very thing right away.

You're setting it in modern times, a la Forest, ie post-hunting ban? Intriguing.
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elizahonig October 11 2007, 03:57:19 UTC

Goodness! I'd always imagined a scene where Miranda visits Trennels and meets Patrick, but this is surprisingly excellent.

richenda October 18 2007, 12:50:54 UTC

Abject apologies - this is probably very good - but I've been fiddling about with settigs for ages and still can't read a word of it