A damning review

[anteros_lmc]

I was having a quick look over my Hornblower Remix draft this morning while having coffee. Daughter, who was wanting a shot of the laptop to play princess games, was peering over my shoulder and wanted to know what I was reading. I told her it was a story about sailors and she asked me to read it to her. So I chose a couple of reasonably

Comments

[esmerelda_t]

Needs more Pirates. *nods*

[anteros_lmc]

Pirates. Yes, you could be right. Pirates and spaniels.

[sarlania]

Well from what I've heard about your daughter she's quite sensible and logical so...

*hides*

[anteros_lmc]

Oi! Just because you've got a devastatingly cute Archie icon doesn't give you the right to be cheeky!

[azdak]

Well, obviously if you leave out the juicy bits she's going to complain!

[anteros_lmc]

Actually you may well have a point there... ;)

[lady_branwyn]

Out of the mouths of babes...
It needs more princesses.

[anteros_lmc]

Meh. Princesses. Normally she's more interested in pirates, I have no idea why it was princesses today.

[nodbear]

pirates , princesses - * nods also* - and here I am reading about puppet show versions of Lord Exmouth's life by a Parisian theatre company that features pirates and his entertaining of the then pricess of Wales in Genoa - so perhpas the P and P quotient is right after all!
toots is going to be great as a reviewer - no one is going to be in doubt what she thinks...

makes me nervous about the story I am working on for her - though it does have pirates in it ...natch !

[anteros_lmc]

puppet show versions of Lord Exmouth's life
ROFL! That sounds like a Fringe performance!

no one is going to be in doubt what she thinks
You're not wrong there, she's usually pretty forthright in voicing her opinions.

though it does have pirates in it
Chuck in a couple of princesses and you'll be fine! XD