I love the voices here! And the exploration of free will, or even the illusion. I miss the Xander and Willow of the early series, and I wonder what would have happened if they could have stayed in character-- grown, of course, but still stayed true to those initially presented, complex characters.
I hope to say a great deal more about free will and the illusion thereof in the real version of this story. Though I also hope I'll say it much more indirectly.
Very good early Giles/Xander moment. Xander's voice was especially good. I liked the way that he equated the research with something he enjoyed so he would stick with it. Even in the beginning he was the heart of the group.
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Thanks, as always, for sharing this.
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Bracing for NaNo yet?
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Of the three fragments, this is my favorite. I think you capture Xander's voice really well.
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