Fic: Scratch (7/11)

[antelope_writes]

Title: Scratch Part 7
Characters: John Hart, Blowfish, Woman from KKBB, numerous OCs
Rating:  Series is hard NC-17; this chapter is in the R range
Summary: A retelling of the Faust myth using TW characters. 
Disclaimer: All canon characters are property of the BBC, all OCs are my own, and Faust is the property of Mephistopheles.

As always, kind thanks

Comments

[jill_of_fandoms]

Oh look! A Jack Harkness referance! *squee*

And Coyote is such a dick to Fjoaan, whipping him like that. Then again, he's starting to deserve it... The descent continues!

[antelope_writes]

Nice catch!

Coyote's no saint and he's no saviour, and as the fic progresses, you'll see he's just as much a crooked bastard as all the rest of them. None of which excuses Fjoaan from acting like a spoiled brat.

[used_songs]

I love your original characters and this whole complex universe that you are building. And bird butt spy cameras? That is PURE!

[antelope_writes]

Well, you wouldn't think to look there, would you?

[used_songs]

It's perfect.

[fmanalyst]

I like the way you're picking up other aspects of the Whoniverse like the Shadow Proclamation and the Judoon. And Fjoaan Tsuhn is becoming a bit of an asshole at this point.

[antelope_writes]

Fjoaan has all of John's baser tendencies and none of his intellect or charm.

[shane_mayhem]

You're back! I don't know how I missed this, but it's brilliant. :) I love the continuing characterizations, and the building plot. (I wish I were half so good at plot).

I love Coyote Walker. He's the awesome.