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ante_luce

Decommissioned [Part 1]

Mar 25, 2011 19:51

Title: Decommissioned
'Verse: TFA
Characters: Optimus. Prowl. Jazz. Blaster.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Angst.

( Oh hai bunny. Where did you come from? Augh get off get off! )

'verse: decommissioned, fic, tf-animated

Comments 15

wicked3659 March 25 2011, 12:06:21 UTC

Ooooooh I like this. It's a very original take on events after the war. I kinda sense unrest here, maybe possibilities of an underground uprising?

I urge for moar! ^_^ (it'd be an interesting story to read if you do).

*nuzz*

ante_luce March 25 2011, 16:26:49 UTC

Bunny is being all insane and shoving notes at me and I have no idea what's going on with the fuzzball ^_^;; I'll try and get more out of it though (I don't think headspace is about to let me leave this here :p)

bookworm_faith March 25 2011, 12:34:52 UTC

*shiver* Man that's creepy. And sadly, the set up in Animated would allow it far too easily.

ante_luce March 25 2011, 16:27:54 UTC

Mmhm *hugs* Am trying to fix :3

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ante_luce March 25 2011, 16:28:45 UTC

Mm, I'm trying to get another bit out, so I hope so :3

bluebirdsoaring March 25 2011, 14:43:13 UTC

Woah, and yet I could see the government doing something like that!! We need more, certainly =) How much of Jazz is still in there? Sounds like at least some of his memoires...I'm hoping enough to connect to Prowl again =) MOAR please!!

ante_luce March 25 2011, 16:30:13 UTC

Glad you like ^_^ I'll see what I can do about more.

renegadewriter8 March 25 2011, 16:44:12 UTC

This is so sad! Poor Prowl having come back to life to find that his friend doesn't remember him! Decommissioned!? Bad council bad BAD!! Oh cruel cruel world!

I hope you continue this, so we can see Prowl make Jazz remember or something. Gahh stupid council!!!

ante_luce March 26 2011, 18:15:36 UTC

Glad you like :3 More is in the works.