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ante_luce

Accidents Happen (Part 2)

Dec 03, 2009 00:52

Title: Accidents Happen (Part 2)
'Verse: 2007 Transformers
Characters: Prowl. Jazz. Ensemble.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: TF cussing.

( Come on, come on/Spin a little tighter/Come on, come on/And the world's a little brighter/Come on, come on ... Accidentally In Love... )

prompts: music, tf-2007, fic, 'verse: accidents happen

Comments 33

eerian_sadow December 2 2009, 19:04:29 UTC

beautiful. just beautiful.

love that introspection by Ironhide at the end, too. shines just the perfect light on it.

...and i kind of wish i had seen Blaster's face. that would have been priceless.

ante_luce December 4 2009, 10:07:21 UTC

Thank you ^_^

So do I, actually *snickerfits*

Their <3 is so deep, it looks like affable association. anonymous December 2 2009, 19:09:58 UTC

"The tactician wonders if this counts as failing his lover, even as he apologises for missing their 'movie date' (Ratchet had been most insistent on keeping him in for observation after his processor crash). Jazz smiles and calls him a silly mech because it's not Prowl's fault and Jazz has already taken care of the ones whose fault it is."

Aw, that seems so protective and sweet of Jazz.

I also love how Prowl has a perfectly rational and reasonable excuse for more 'alone time' with Jazz after they're interrupted by Ratchet (whose description, I must admit, made me cackle maniacally). Poor Optimus and Sideswipe. Heheheh...

Re: Their <3 is so deep, it looks like affable association. ante_luce December 4 2009, 10:09:26 UTC

Jazz needs to keep his Prowler functioning, because a tactician stuck in med bay = no snuggle time.

And Prowl can always come up with a logical reason for alone time with Jazz ;3

kelsoi December 2 2009, 19:35:39 UTC

I'mma have the image of an unconscious Prime being dragged down the hallway by his foot stuck in my head for the rest of the day.

I really like your writing style, and I very much enjoyed this (and part one, of course)--very sweet and just awesome overall. Thank you! ^-^

ante_luce December 4 2009, 10:09:45 UTC

Thank you for reading ^_^

mirage_shinkiro December 2 2009, 20:45:36 UTC

I had to laugh over the Prime/Ironhide/Sideswipe sequence. And, of course, I love the sweetness.

ante_luce December 4 2009, 10:10:58 UTC

Thank you :3

sanjuno December 2 2009, 23:30:52 UTC

*chortles* I know it's been said, but tge scene in the hallway where everyone realizes that Jazz is alive is brilliant. If I had to choose though, my favorite line would be when Ironhide goes "He comforts himself with the knowledge that apparently neither head tactician nor head of Ops had realised it either, and it was their relationship in the first place."

... Ironhide and Ratchet seem to be making a habit of using the revelation of Prowl and Jazz's relationship to torment the rank and file. XD

ante_luce December 4 2009, 10:12:25 UTC

What can I say? It's funny watching the young'uns flail about ;P