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ante_luce

Accidents Happen

Nov 28, 2009 15:27

Title: Accidents Happen
'Verse: 2007 Transformers
Characters: Jazz. Prowl. Ratchet.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: TF cussing.

( So she said what's the problem baby/What's the problem I don't know/Well maybe I'm in love (love)... )

prompts: music, tf-2007, fic, 'verse: accidents happen

Comments 35

synaltern November 28 2009, 08:13:39 UTC

Took me from amusement to sadly-expectent to sad to glee.

Whoo. Good job.

ante_luce November 28 2009, 12:05:35 UTC

Thank you ^_^

ladystarscream November 28 2009, 08:26:43 UTC

wow. nicely written. The flow of the stories was so smooth, from one into another. And the range of the emotions relayed were also nice.

ante_luce November 28 2009, 12:05:47 UTC

Thanks :3

anonymous November 28 2009, 08:55:17 UTC

Loved it. Loved it. Loved it.

And, sorry, but I'm too tired to be more coherent than that right now.

-Jenn

ante_luce November 28 2009, 12:06:00 UTC

Glad you like ^_^

zomgitsalaura November 28 2009, 09:02:29 UTC

this makes me happy :D

ante_luce November 28 2009, 12:06:41 UTC

Thanks ^_^

reichan28 November 28 2009, 13:23:45 UTC

The flow was amazingly smooth and I love how it really just showed the very simple understanding between them.

And then the sudden switch to Ratchet POV and last sentence had me cackling. That was just awesomeness.

ante_luce November 29 2009, 07:47:32 UTC

Ratchet is awesome, that's why ^_^ Glad you like.