Comments | ante_luce: 28 Sojourns

ante_luce

28 Sojourns

Sep 13, 2009 02:02

Title: 28 Sojourns
'Verse: IDW Transformers. AU for this fic.
Characters: Prowl. Springer. Ensemble. OC.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: TF cussing.

( *sighs as 28!bunny promptly chases after next 'verse* )

prompts: 28, fic, 'verse: sojourn's end

Comments 15

hd18 September 12 2009, 19:21:40 UTC

Awesome stories! (love Sojourner!verse)

Two problems: There's a bit of text doubled in 3. Silly and 28. Playing With Kids cuts off.

ante_luce September 12 2009, 19:37:22 UTC

Yeah, I just realised ^_^;; My net' connection died just as I clicked post, so something must've gotten jumbled. Should be fixed now.

hd18 September 12 2009, 19:46:59 UTC

Aha! awesomesauce.

What are they about to start playing in the last one? Benchball?
Wait, no benches.
I give up.

ante_luce September 12 2009, 19:59:31 UTC

Heh, it can be, if you want. Imma leave that to your imagination.

anonymous September 12 2009, 20:32:36 UTC

This was absolutely wonderful, especially since I had just been thinking about this 'verse last night. I love all of them, but I think my favorites are probably Naughty and Kick-Ass.
And I may be wrong, but I don't think you indicated even once whether Sojourner was a mech or a femme - that takes amazing talent and creativity.
Going off to re-read.

-Jenn

ante_luce September 13 2009, 01:57:56 UTC

*blush* Thanks, I did want to leave that detail open to interpretation.

okamichan September 13 2009, 00:12:38 UTC

I was choking up at some of these entries. My heart really goes out to Springer. *wibble*

I adore the idea that Prowl would teach the Cons why they don't mess with his sparkling.

The speculation was great. XD

I want to pick a single favorite, but many of these had qualities that I absolutely love.

ante_luce September 13 2009, 01:57:01 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you like it :3

dvana September 13 2009, 02:03:41 UTC

A wonderful mix of emotions here; that's what I've always liked about these 28s. Very nice.

ante_luce September 15 2009, 09:22:33 UTC

Thank you ^_^

cmdrtekk September 14 2009, 05:28:26 UTC

It is interesting how this set of 28's (AU they may be) changes the feeling of the original piece. The initial stand alone piece was very poignant. And this AU set takes away from that feeling to allow a much more cheerful outcome. But that aside; regarding these, you did a great job with them conveying the setting and building a history for the AU with the set. You also run quite the gamut of emotions with this set; humor, cute, funny, serious, sincere, fear, happiness.

There were a few lines that really stand out for me even now as just fiting. From naive, "the Dynobots won't stop laughing" and "Smokescreen said to ask you, because Prowl would terminate him if he told me anything.” from daring "Wow. How long was I gone?” from at the beach, “Would I lie to you, ‘Journer?” “Yes, Sides." (what a smart kid), from playing with kids "I don’t know why I was ever concerned about Sojourner lacking interaction with individuals of a similar mental development stage.” Then Book Reading was just all in all cute. And it appears to me that ( ... )

ante_luce September 15 2009, 09:23:15 UTC

Thank you for reading ^_^ Glad you like.