Best break I've taken for a long time. Seriously, this was awesome. Looking past the sex as being porny I think it was really tastefully and beautifully written. It was gratuitous. It felt like an insight into a moment in a couples time together not just sex for the sake of it - even if that was the intention. Am I making sense? Probably not. My brain is fried from goodness. Back to work!
p.s. Write my sexytime for me? Pretty please. You're so good at it. Of course you'd get no credit and I'd tell everyone I wrote it :P
Re: Amazeballsant1matterJuly 31 2011, 20:25:30 UTC
Honestly, calling it "porn" is kind of a little bit me hiding behind self-depricating humour. The emotion's supposed to be there. I'm just uptight about the whole thing.
I'm really glad you liked it!
And no, I will not write your sexytimes. The shirt ripping and sexy nightmare scenes in LC were capital-H Hot and I'm sure you will nail the sex scene beautifully.
Wow ... that was ... amazing and not porn at all. To my mind porn is all about sex and not about emotions and there was plenty of emotions going on here. I especially liked this:
"I want you. I want you with me, in my heart and my life and my bed. I want to be yours."
You can definitely come out of hiding and keep writing, I can see there's talent there
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p.s. Write my sexytime for me? Pretty please. You're so good at it. Of course you'd get no credit and I'd tell everyone I wrote it :P
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I'm really glad you liked it!
And no, I will not write your sexytimes. The shirt ripping and sexy nightmare scenes in LC were capital-H Hot and I'm sure you will nail the sex scene beautifully.
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"I want you. I want you with me, in my heart and my life and my bed. I want to be yours."
You can definitely come out of hiding and keep writing, I can see there's talent there
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